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dwin
02-17-2004, 02:35 PM
Hello,

This Celica is made for my personal project. Actually for learning 3d. I would love to hear all your critiques and comments.

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dwin/images/back.1.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dwin/images/front.1.jpg


Thank you,
Edwin

mash1000
02-17-2004, 02:44 PM
I think that model is basicly good, but you have to work with material and light.
It looks like flying near the ground, and weels could be bigger (14"? - make 17) and the material from it its too shiny.
Windscreen material is not good either.
Headlights and taildlights should have some kind of smooth in the edges because their look not real.

:cool:

lilCara
02-17-2004, 04:54 PM
The shadows look bad, can't imagine why. What program and/or renderer?
Also you could have chosen a better HDRmap.
And you should work a little more on the details, the first thing I noticed is that the door handles are missing.

Overall, pretty nice work. And if you say it's for learning, you're on the right track! ;)

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