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InTheCity
02-17-2004, 08:19 AM
Created in Cinema 4Dxl.

Testing lighting skills and pretty basic modeling on this one.
DOF used for mother ship.

Crits welcome.

http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/08/d/0/DropshipReturn.jpg
mikepolizos
02-17-2004, 08:45 AM
The Image ain't showing!
Try another view/render!
Clockwork
02-17-2004, 08:48 AM
Something is off, either the model lacks detail or the background is too busy and drawing attention away from the piece. It almost looks like a minature.
genius995
02-17-2004, 08:52 AM
Good job, nice model :thumbsup: Nice engine-haze :)

But indeed, there's something off. I think a bit less DOF. And maybe a bit less reflection on the dropship.
DenkoM
02-17-2004, 11:25 AM
I agree with Clockwork, There is too much DOF so it looks like a miniature:wavey:
Protoplasma
02-17-2004, 11:30 AM
is the bg an image or is it a modeled mothershipwith heavy dof ? if its the dof is way too heavy. its hard to decide for the eye where the attention should be placed in here. haze looks good .. thats a nice plus in cinema. change the bg / dof and keep on modeling the ship. try to change your cam positions. could be turn out nice ! keep it up!
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