Character : Bloated lord

[liquidminduk]

if that doesnt work please use the url below


http://fire.prohosting.com/~danmist/bloated.html

[Clockwork]

lol! I like the title, nice render, it seems a little washed out, so hard to see al the details, I love the ground fog, nice touch!

[liquidminduk]

ok, just read the rules, no links alowed, sorry rich!!!

[liquidminduk]

So many veiw and only 1 comment, o well thaks for looking, if the image hasnt appeared please click the link.

Would really appreciate some crits on how to improve


liquid

[genius995]

Nice model and nice atmosphere :) :thumbsup:
I like it.

But the background is a bit too "blurry". And the skin of the character looks a bit too smooth, too clean :) Try a bump map and some dirt on the diffuse map.

Overall, nice job. Like the fluid effectes too :)

[Banshee]

pic doesn´t load, links don´t work. :shrug:

[DenkoM]

Wow, good modeling, If I was you then I'd make it a litlle bit Sharper , but ehn thas his face is amazing also lighting is good :applause: :applause:

[liquidminduk]

Thanks for your comments,

I wanted to give it a smooth feel as i wanted it to look like streached dry dead skin over a gassy intereios, hence the word bloated, i might concider doing a second vesion with a different bump to see what it looks like.

I agree it does look a bit blurry, i'll try to sort that out too.

Thaks for your crits, ill keep you updated.





liquid

[liquidminduk]

i would really appreciate some mre crits on how to improve, cheers



liquid

[liquidminduk]

ok, sorted it out so you can see it now!!!


sorry about that guys



liquid

[aesir]

I still cant see it unless I click the link.

I think the model is great btw. The background could use some work but I like the model and texture

[liquidminduk]

whats goin on, 2 secs ago it worked!!!

lets try again

http://fire.prohosting.com/~danmist/bloatedsecond.jpg



if it still doesnt work i dont know what to suggest?

Any help?!?!?!



liquid

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