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yuchenpan 02-14-2004, 12:43 AM this is my audi concept engine done in Lightwave and Rhino, time took: 1 month thanks for your time :)
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Bushfire
02-14-2004, 02:36 AM
great moddeling even if it wouldn't work physicaly.
im assuming thats its ralitivly semetrical and there another set of pistons on the other side out of view
1) its a v8 yet you've got 5 pistons on 1 side, should have 4 or be a v10
2) as youve got quatro on the belt i would imaging its a quad cam, ie anothe cam sharft on the other side of the crank shaft.
3) you should have 2 (4 if it is a quad cam) valves above each piston
4) the spings on the valves that are down dont seem to be compressed against anything (im asuming that bit has been cut out but should still be compressing the spings).
5) the cam followers dont seem to be following the cams.
6) the cams are to sharp, they should be more like an egg looking from the side.
7) the cam shaft should be nearly the same diamiter as the large part of the cam.
8) the counter balances for the pistons are way to big.
9) the conrods should be a H-beam/I-beam in cross section.
im not sure wat you have in the center as thats were the pistons would normaly be but its a consept...
of couse once you put the 'cut out' on none of this will mater.
hope this helps.
cya.
p.s. sry about any spellin mistakes, im sure there will be afew.
yuchenpan
02-14-2004, 02:58 AM
thanks bushfire for the critic, I appreciated!
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