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02-08-2004, 01:46 PM
long time no image post hehehehe,well this is the pencils only,i didnt want to kill this piece by my inks hehehehe anyways i hope u dig.
02-09-2004, 10:57 AM
Nice attention to details!
Why does it come down lights from the fence in the roof when the opening in the roof is all black?
Maybe add some more highlights and luminosity on the character to make him stand out some more?
Why not add either some glow to his eyes or, an object that hes holding in his left hand?
keep it up!
02-09-2004, 12:51 PM
thanks for the reply and for the great crits.im not that good in coloring though,i hope i reach a level that satisfies me.thnx againe
02-09-2004, 01:35 PM
yeah very cool imagr,but i agree the light is coming from the top
.next time preplan when drawing.where the light's should be
before colouring an image.that's all nice job :thumbsup:
02-09-2004, 02:29 PM
:thumbsup: keep up the good work
02-09-2004, 02:36 PM
:bowdown: thnx brothas,as for coloring im still in the learning of many things field,if u see my gallery you`ll realise that i dont do such coloring,this is maybe my 7th artwork that i color in such style,but ur cris helps big time.much respect
02-09-2004, 08:14 PM
Shadows are needed, looks like he is in a sewer so a bit darker, besides that i love the pose and the composition but dont be afraid to keep working on it, never know what surprises you can get later on.:thumbsup:
01-17-2006, 09:00 AM
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