3mnt. animation film....

[pluMmet]

Well...I admire anyone who puts time into an animation. So I encourage you to keep developing your skillz.

Now for the harsh reality of my crit. What the Hell is going on with that carpet...the bump map looks animated. And the big thing that bothers me (and I'm sorry cause I sure you put alot of thought into it) the guys hat respondes as if it were his eyebrows...WTF. Mabey I'm all wrong...Maby it's Gitchy???

Please.please continue with your efforts..you've got alot of the basics down, now work on refinement.

g/l
:beer:

[shashhh]

thanx for the critic......ya his hat is his eyebraws.....there's nothing wrong with the carpet.....it's becuz of the compression....it looks like animated but it's not......it's my first short film and i'm doing anotherone very soon......i think i'm satisfied with my work for now...cuz whole animation sequence was created in 3 weeks incl. rendering......it took 2 weeks for modeling and rigging.......so over all it's 6 week's work and i think it's was made very fast.......so i don have any complains agaist it....if i would have more time, i wouold have done a better job....
but anyways.....thanx for sharing your thaughts......

shash

[Milho]

First :thumbsdow
-The carpet, i mean is to blurry, to high scale factor.
-The first camera-panning looks bad. you can feel the TCB of the keyframes, you know what i mean?

Now the :thumbsup:
Very cool and dynamic cameramovement. Funny story and anims. And you can sure be proud of it. I'm looking forward to see the final version with sound and other shortanims of you.


:beer:

[gaggle]

Haha great, nicely done there. Funny. Good cartoony animation-style.

I like the eyebrow-hat for what it's worth.

[shashhh]

ya now i think there are really some problems with the carpet cuz i had two replys i got which is not really happy with the carpet...i'll do whatever i can.....but anyways thanx for the critics guys......i think i'm satisfied with the film cuz it's done in 6 weeks including everything........

starting my new film from 1st july.........i'll keep posting it for cirtics......it helps a lot

shash

[shashhh]

this is the poster of my film.......take a look at the film.....http://www.vfs.com/~m08shashwat/index.htm/lmsd.JPG

[shashhh]

how much time it's taking to down this clip????any idea????

shash

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