CGTalk - Another cellphone

FSkarstedt

02-05-2004, 09:18 PM

Hi all.

My first post showing off my work here at CGTalk. A little nervewrecking after seeing all the fantastic work from all of you.

I've modelled this cellphone and I would love some comments on what could be done better. It's to be included into my tiny company's demo reel.

http://www.affectworks.com/new/phone.jpg

Model was done with Maya 5 (subd to poly's) and textured with Photoshop.

Thanks for your time.

redogre

02-05-2004, 10:19 PM

It seems fine but you need (well I really don't khow the name) the litlle trench like carving line around the phone, where two part attach to each other. And you need a brand name just under the screen, or make the screen bigger...

Garma

02-05-2004, 10:49 PM

I'd love a closeup.

The main issue is that the connection between the two parts is too smooth. It's especially visible with the left render, normally those two parts fit perfectly but you leave a whole bunch of space, it's almost organic :)

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