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BSODWarrior
02-05-2004, 08:39 PM
This is my first focused critique item. I told myself I would post one of these when I got a lot of good feedback from one of my images...

Its simple, but here it is... have at it.

http://www.3dfightclub.com/~bsod/uploads/LeafDesktop.jpg
(Sorry slow speed connections for size, but I figured I should post the full size.)

Its mainly texture work... as seen in my wire:

http://www.3dfightclub.com/~bsod/uploads/wires.jpg

I used maya
Mr.Black
02-05-2004, 10:36 PM
The leaf is very realistic ( taken from a photo I persume. The imaage would ba far cooler tho if u removed that orb there...it doesn't fit really
Kodos
02-06-2004, 12:53 AM
I agree that the orb doesn't belong. It reminds the viewer that they are looking at a CG image. The leaf is beautiful. Excellent work. One thing that bothers me though is the shadow the leaf is casting. It's too dark and solid. I could be wrong but something as translucent as a leaf could not cast a shadow that heavy. Too much light would past through it.

The shadow from the orb is much better. Get a real leaf and shine a light on it to see what kind of shadow it casts. I'm fairly sure it won't be that heavy.
bcairns
02-06-2004, 03:36 AM
It would be cool if it was floating down onto some water or something (well, I think it would anyway)!
JavonX
02-06-2004, 03:20 PM
Well, it's simple.

No idea what to crit there, looks more like a test scene to me. What you you want us to crit (that is part fo the rules by the way)
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