New Wip

[jddog]

hehe :thumbsup:

some personal comments:
I will see the part of the sidewalk with some grainy bump... I mean not so clean and smooth.
Vegetation on the background looks a little bit unrealistic... strange foliage
The stain on the floor (near the grille > I don't know if the terms is right) it looks like it was doubled.

really cool work rollmops !

jdd

[JamesMK]

Excellent models and materials! The composition of the shot leaves me feeling rather empty though...

[artemesia66]

beautiful textures and lighting, as always. i agree w JamesMK, though--for me the center of interest (compositionally) seems to be the cobbled pavement.

[flingster]

wow fantastic stuff.

composition is confused but maybe that suits the scene.
c+c: glass window paint needs some water streaks and green/brown water marks or something to clean compared with frame.
the palettes wood back right is to dark grainy look to it...but at least like that it doesn't draw the eye to much...whereas if it was lighter in colour it would probably distract the eye.

great little detailing bud...v impressed.:buttrock:

[flingster]

just thought about composition...if you had something like a little red striped plastic kids ball in the middle it would hold the detail..or a childs toy or something with colour...to complement the fact the kids scooter thing is laying on the floor i guess.
dunno...might look a little contrived or central...but no harm in trying something.:shrug:

[Fredivoss]

Thanks for your feedback:) .Well ,the composition is going to be changed in some aspects.Same to the floor bricks in the middle.
That render was done with geometry-antialising only,so some of the textures come out a bit different than possible.The final will be rendered about 3000 pixels wide.here in that render ,they were set to 950 pixels in cinema.Still some work waiting to be done. :beer: rollmops .

[Siddhy]

great thing :applause:
what i really like in your pics is this distinctive rollmops look :)

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