View Full Version : Vehicule : BENTLEY 8 SPEED EXP
hi everyone, i decide to post the finish pic here, i'm not really satisfate of the post prod, but, i don't know how to remediate :cry:
please, critique, and advice :thumbsup:
two version :
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/bentley8speedcompo2.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/bentley8speedexp.jpg
and my final
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/bentley8speedexphr.jpg
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simonvb
02-02-2004, 09:39 AM
It's very nice. Maybe the picture is just a little too blurred, but perhaps that's me. Good job !
Xorion
02-02-2004, 09:56 AM
Very nice work! Good to see a car in a proper scenery, not just the standard boring stand. I also like the texture detail (dirt) on the car. The reflectivenes on the material on the car isn't too exacurated either, i like that. Keep it up! What software did you use by the way? Could be see a wireshot ?
thanks for this kind words xorion :love:
i go to school , but you'll have the wire this evening :thumbsup:
i'm wirting a tut on it,
Nice model, love the reflection on the windscreen.:thumbsup:
Xorion
02-02-2004, 11:48 AM
I would love a tut on that. It's about time i did a car :p
Hi
i've curently done the first part of nine of the tut, and don't traduce it yet (unless you understand well french :surprised )
and the wire you wished
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/wire.jpg
:wavey:
Xorion
02-02-2004, 08:54 PM
nice and clean wire, i like :)
suurland reference?
AdamT
02-02-2004, 10:29 PM
Great model and render--I can find nothing to criticize. :)
no, atlas collection models reference, the little maquet in iron you can buy :scream:
here an enhancement, with DOF :D
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/tyio-bentley8.jpg
and the finishment, with new car color, much like the british's green
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/tyio-bentley82.jpg
ToddD
02-28-2004, 04:13 AM
It is sweet!!!! Maybe the addition of a little backlight would give it more depth, I am struggling with the same problem. Great work, the renders look a little flat IMO.
thanks :thumbsup:
two static view ;)
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsm...tley/34face.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/3arr.jpg
Supervlieg
02-29-2004, 06:08 PM
NIce job, I like the car. The renders could be a bit lighter.
The first pic of your last post doesnt show up.
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/34face.jpg
thanks man :) , url good now :wip:
Guybrush
02-29-2004, 09:06 PM
very good work tyio, are u going to do more compositions?!
i don't knwo, if you have any idea, please :thumbsup:
i primary wanted to make two bentley (number 7 et 8) in a tunel, but my computer is near a calculator :hmm:
mikepolizos
03-01-2004, 09:14 AM
Looking cool to me!
Cool model and great render dude!
Keep rendering!
:thumbsup:
SpaXe
03-01-2004, 10:50 AM
Well I can't see where the difference is between those 3 pics, but the scene seems that the car is rught running, then why the tires aren't?
or maybe just like the already saying..it's too blur.:thumbsup:
ok, so i'll but less blur:surprised
Guybrush
03-01-2004, 07:19 PM
tyio, why dont u render the cars in separated layers?!
i have render it in multi layer,
-the car
-the shadow (matte/shadow)
-the background
and just mix it in photoshop, so, i can quickly change some little thing
if you want to try some thing, i send you the PDS files with all layer :thumbsup:
ok, i found the way to make DOF without lens effect (later in the tut :p )
so, the final picture of the car,
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/tyio-bentleyfinale.jpg
i'll make another scene with two bentley8 (7et 8), but later :thumbsup:
Guybrush
03-01-2004, 08:27 PM
Originally posted by tyio
i don't knwo, if you have any idea, please :thumbsup:
i primary wanted to make two bentley (number 7 et 8) in a tunel, but my computer is near a calculator :hmm:
i was saying render each car in a separate layer...this way its only like doing 2 renders that ur computer can manage :)
ok man, i'll make it like that
i wrote another part of my tut, you can found it on my web site first (in french)
and two static view, sorry, forgot the calipers :eek:
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/34face.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/bentley/3arr.jpg
hi men, finally finish (near finish, maybe finalisation needed) the tut about the bentley, please, read it, and tell me if i can improve it
still in french, but if it's interessting, i'll translate it :)
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