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dhenion
01-30-2004, 05:57 AM
I'm finally to the point of starting animation on my "Dog Dog" short story animation. This is just the first 10 seconds and I still have some cleanup to do - but would like some feedback on just the ANIMATION as it stands now. (Later I'll add lighting, some more props, etc.)

http://www.dh-graphics.com/wip/DD_scn1.avi

Many thanks,
Dave Henion
http://www.dh-graphics.com/

nathanielbell
01-31-2004, 01:38 AM
Looking good. One thing I noticed is that the wrist holding the broom is kind of stiff. And alittle more movement in the neck area (sort of bobing back and forth) would make him feel a little looser I think if thats kind of what you going for.

Over all.... NICE.

dhenion
02-05-2004, 09:13 AM
I've put up an update to this animation here (2.8MB):

http://www.dh-graphics.com/wip/DD_scn2.avi

I haven't gone back and tweaked the first part of it yet, but have added the next 12 seconds of animation and did some work on the lighting, environment, and textures.

But I'm mainly looking for any comments anyone has on the animation itself.

Many thanks,
Dave Henion

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