chick & robo

[OrestesMantra]

Everything looks good except for that weird crease on the girls top.Whatd you make and render it with?

[3dean]

rendered w/max 4 scanline

background took about 18 min. w/ 146 lights

i think the crease you are talking about is meant to be there.

perhaps i should re-model it a bit.

later

dean

[OrestesMantra]

It just seams a little pointy.

[kreno]

yeah, when a girls shirt is stretched like that it's usually got 2 or 3 creases... but not over and under creases, just stretched areas... looks good, but as someone said... pointy....

Overall, a good composition, good job man :thumbsup:

edit: by the way... you said this was testing scale... well... her arms don't seem to be muscular enough to hold those huge guns man... either you need to give her more tone, or have her holding one with both hands...

[kdub]

Good work! nothing to say that hasn't been said. I guess you must be the machine phase guy, that trailer, while a bit too big(120MB or something), was really awesome, hope to see the finished project.

That chick is hot, hard to do with a computer :thumbsup:

[phyle]

Thats great!
I agree with most of what everyone else said.
I like the fell of it, textures arent too detailed - has a nice style.

couple of things-
I think the robots hands should be bigger
I think the composition could be better, seems a bit off kilter to me. maybe the robot in closer and the spaceship a bit further away- Im not completely sure of the robots scale, at first glance i thought he was the same size as the chick, now im thinking hes really huge- It would be cool to do something to emphesise his size.

Apart from that great work!

[el diablo]

i think you should use 147 lights....el diablo

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[kreno]

Originally posted by kdub
Good work! nothing to say that hasn't been said. I guess you must be the machine phase guy, that trailer, while a bit too big(120MB or something), was really awesome, hope to see the finished project.

That chick is hot, hard to do with a computer :thumbsup:

Machine phase??

[kdub]

www.machinephase.com either thier styles are identical or we have the same person.

[DreamcastDC]

Pretty good!!! You should encoded the Trailer with DivX 5.0.2 in 512x360 or higher!!!!!

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