illustration-Girl, critique please

[Tahl'eN]

The robot part (?) and the laptop are great. For the most part, they look more painstakingly modeled and rendered than drawn in photoshop. The girl has a lot of nice parts--her legs, arms, hands and upper body--but her tummy looks really flat (2D) as does her face, and her hair is nice but a totally different style from the rest of the drawing. For the detail that is in the robot, I would expect to see individual hairs, and some more detial in her face (lips would be nice). Also, for as dark as the shadow under the 'bot is, there should be a darker shadow under her chin, and shadows from her hair.

[thedaemon]

Her left arm is not thick enough. It would actually be thicker than the right, since its closer to the camera. Also the shadow under her chin /muscle there look bad. Smooth it out a bit and see what you think. Also the shadow behind the girl, is floating.... or so it seems. Shadows are sharper the closer they are to the source object. Nice work!! Don't stop on it now! Make it really great!

[Game-boi]

The shadow on the robot part looks too thick and too dark in spots. To the right of the picture the girl and the robot part have a nice shadow. It's light, but it works. On the left, the robot part has a pure black shadow that looks a little too photoshoppy. Also the Robot part doesn't have any shading like that anywhere on it. I agree with the crits above.

Overall, I like you piece. It's nerdishly cute! Keep on going!

-Chris

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