Character - Female Head

[Garma]

hi,

do you use refs? if so I'd like to see them, if not do it now :)

some general crits:

- chin is too pointy
-nose too wide (especially the nostrils, make them bend a little more inwards)

female improvements:

- the shape of the mouth isn't really female. take a look at some refs and you'll know what I mean. this is the major issue.
- females have smooth faces. There's a bump just below the outer corner of the eye. smooth that out.
- round the top of the head some more. make the head oval or heartshaped

good luck

[Tim Deneau]

I would say the eyes are too far apart, the pupils should line up with the corners of the mouth. The whole face in general looks a little flat, you could make the profile stronger.

Concentrate more on getting the neck right, it makes the head look too wide and the jaw too prominent.

[xcvbnm]

hi,
almost done...i guess, except ear, loops are nice...
depends on your ref, but i feel you check these --
1. side view is flat, pull the verts deeper
2. eyes dont lie on plane but curve around the face
3. cheek bones are placed high
5. nose has an African look, if thats what you want its ok
6. lower lip should fold inwards a bit
7. eyes are far apart & neck thin, as said above
8. eyebrows are flat
9. move the chin deeper and make it rounder

:)

[Stillwell]

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