gun!

[qing-gong]

good!
:bounce:

[OrestesMantra]

Looks photorealistic.Awesome!:thumbsup:

[panda]

good :wip:
less highlight it's looks better.

[shoxis]

well done!:beer:

[chazdogg89]

maybe its just me, but does the grip look like it could use a bump?

[Delucubus]

Looks way too metallic. But uh. . . counter-strike, must play. . .

[dave_baer]

That's the speacial forces elite platoon all chrome version, eh?
Nice, but give it textures. :buttrock:

[good day]

chazdogg89!
no bump textures!
all is polygons!

[zworp]

the grip looks a bit odd.

whats that thing that sticks out near the shell "throw-out-thing"

othervise, looks great. :thumbsup:

[Dave Black]

Why that would be the "forward assist" control! Either that or you are talking about the brass deflector(the little wedge-like protuberance directly behind the ejection port)

Nice model! Needs some work around the flash supressor, in fact, it has no flash supressor, but all in all, very nice.

The grip is not a stock component, you might want to change it a bit.

Also, the front sight is too thin.

Cool!

:thumbsup:

[ICEPRINCE]

nice 43,I like cs too~
:airguitar
ur work very nice!:beer:

[good day]

CEPRINCE THAnks !
3DZealot thank you advice!
i will modify it !

[Cadillacs57]

excelent work, i hope to learn that soon hehehehehe
i just know how to open maya

[Rob3D31]

NICE! hey whats the poly count, i heard the lightsabers in starwars were 1 million...you get anywhere near that?

[good day]

The poly count is 29440! he he !

[telecaustic]

The mag that is out of the gun is too short. You only have it modeled up to the point in which the mag meets the "mag housing" on the gun body. Either way, looks good, I wish I would have modeled it.

c.w

[Dave Black]

Here is a pic I made displaying problem areas of your model:

[Dave Black]

Oh, and anyone undertaking the construction of an AR15/M16/M4 model should have a look at this diagram. These are complex weapons. I hope this helps:

http://world.guns.ru/assault/ar15_blow.jpg

[wildekyote]

If I were to pick anyhting that I would look to change it's the casings of the bullets. I don't know if it's because it's the only color in teh scene or what, but they seem a little bright. Perhaps its a lighting reflection, not sure, but beyond that I think it's a solid rendition. A few parts have some uniquness to them, butI still works extremely well. Superb job.

[Dave Black]

Yeah, I agree wildekyote.

I'm sorry if my posts about the problem areas came off sounding pretentious. After a quick re-read, I'd take it that way.

My only concern was if you where modeling this firearm for a professional project, that the details would be very important.

If this is a personal thing, I think the model is just fine.

Absolutely steller model, best one of these I've see so far.

:thumbsup:

[element412]

That's the speacial forces elite platoon all chrome version, eh?
Nice, but give it textures. :buttrock:


hehe.
:p

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