a bass~~

[akira9999]

i have a band in my school, and i am a bass. so i drew this picture.
i like the rock music. :)

[europe]

good job,my sweet heart:D

[gogo5]

just X X X

[GUOXUFENG]

Originally posted by akira9999
i have a band in my school, and i am a bass. so i drew this picture.
i like the rock music. :)
2»´í very good .
your idea is very good
and you may notice that your picture is art

[akira9999]

Originally posted by gogo5
just X X X
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now it is ok

[BeaverFlens]

Originally posted by akira9999
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now it is ok

nope, still not...

[akira9999]

i can the image.don`t you?

[Downpour]

I really like your style and some of the close up detail looks great...

I especially like the girls face...

There are two main problems though, and they are both related to the overall proportions.

1) you seem to have reverse foreshortening on the legs, the one on the ground should be much smaller and the other leg should be bigger as it is closer to you.

2) The front of the bike looks a little flat, try to make it look more 3D

[akira9999]

Originally posted by Downpour
I really like your style and some of the close up detail looks great...

I especially like the girls face...

There are two main problems though, and they are both related to the overall proportions.

1) you seem to have reverse foreshortening on the legs, the one on the ground should be much smaller and the other leg should be bigger as it is closer to you.

2) The front of the bike looks a little flat, try to make it look more 3D
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thanks for your answer.
i must have a change:)

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