View Full Version : Sadgirl in a train...
Hi guys, my first post here, made with maya and photoshop.
"i hope you like it" =)
http://membres.lycos.fr/iamtheprincekheldar/sadgirl_cgtalk.jpg
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LeroyBrown
01-20-2004, 01:08 AM
I like the enviroment she is in. Though its hard to tell where her arms are, looks like she is wearing a leather body bag. I would be sad too if i had to wear that.
Party
01-20-2004, 04:42 AM
Face you created do not looks exactly like girl`s face. Check it`s proportions... =)
Krypton
01-20-2004, 07:40 AM
I really like the textures, lighting, and environment in this piece. The only thing that jumps out at me are the proportions of her facial features. I can't put my finger on it, but something just feels wrong. I think it's her eyes, they might be a little too big maybe? I like how you wrote on the window "sad." It adds a nice touch :)
oxicus
01-20-2004, 11:23 AM
looks good, but one thing that jumps at me is that she doesnt realy look sad...i think her mouth looks fine but her eyes are too open and not droopy enough. perhaps put some red around the eyes to make it look like she was crying. other than that looks great
blinkling
01-20-2004, 12:34 PM
scene is excellent, nice tarnished look.
the facial features are long cheek bones and a consequently long nose which somewhat gives her a non-caucasian look.
but I have a friend from Turkey which actually have exactly these features :)
she looks like the model in your picture except for the eyes though. which in my opinion is a little to slanted and oriental if you are trying for that middle eastern look.
I have to agree with the others on the "jacket" it s too glossy and looks like a polished leather shell around her.
and the glare in her hair/forehead from the light is way too bright
other that that excellent work mate!
a wire would also be nice ;)
Shotty
01-20-2004, 01:14 PM
In my opinion, it looks like (plus what the other guys said) she has just recently shaved :)
She looks more scared than sad though
TheEdge
01-20-2004, 04:38 PM
I think the eyes may be a little too angled. Also the jaw line may be slope too fast.
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