[character] christy v2

[DazP]

Interesting. Is that hair photographic or modeled and rendered?

I think you need to re-examine the female form as it were ( always a good thing to do ;p )

What reference are you using? You really should be surrounded by the stuff. The immediate things that strike me are:

Her knee height is too low, her hands are too small, her shoulders should not be wider than her hips, the tips of her fingers should be about half way down her thighs, so I think her arms might be too short, but If you make the hands slightly bigger and raise the knee height it might be OK. The feet are somewhat flat looking and the musculature feels a little strange in places.

Surround yourself in good ref and keep at it.

[Tahl'eN]

The head is amazing. But the body needs a lot of work still. In addition to the above, the knees are too thin, the calves are too flat, her boobs need to actually rest on her chest, and those nipples make me want to wear safety goggles.
Reference images are very good things. (-: Keep going, and you'll have something great here.

[niki]

the face is very good, but the anatomy of the body still needs work: the musculature of the thighs, the knees, the ankles...
add more detail to the body...and can you post the wire?
the hair are fantastic...

[Pillboxx]

Wow, amazing face. It is so good, it looks like a photograph. Even the hair is perfect. I would like to see some other angles of the face. And maybe the face with the body together.

How did you get such accurate detail on the face? Obvious you are more familiar with facial anatomy than body. It is hard to believe the same person modeled the face and the body.

I think the eyes need some more work to make it look more like the photo. Keep up the good work.

http://homepage.mac.com/pillboxx/.Pictures/Wires/Christy.jpg

[valentine]

@ Pillboxx: ahh great, another turlington admirer :))) heres another angle of the head - solely rendered for you :)

http://mitglied.lycos.de/nubkiddie/christy_face.jpg


@ niki: ![...] the musculature of the thighs, the knees, the ankles...
add more detail to the body...and can you post the wire? [...]' - please be a bit more specific. heres the wire: (btw: ive seen that u are using cinema 4d - i am using it, too)

http://mitglied.lycos.de/nubkiddie/christy_wire.jpg


@ Tahl'eN: '[...]and those nipples make me want to wear safety goggles.[...]' haha - nice one :)) ... but wtf are 'calves' ?


@ all: heres the current status of the body shown in a 'before-after-rendering'. pls formulate your c&cs a bit more specific:

http://mitglied.lycos.de/nubkiddie/christy_before.jpg http://mitglied.lycos.de/nubkiddie/christy_after.jpg


pls continue write those great c&c's :) thx !

regards
jannis

[Biped]

I think the upper part of the body looks great , but the lower part still needs some work.

[Tahl'eN]

Calves are at the back of the lower legs.

[valentine]

i tweaked the geometry, added the bodytexture and played around with the lighting... still very wip... :/

c&c's are more than welcome ;)

http://mitglied.lycos.de/nubkiddie/christy_wip_14.jpg http://mitglied.lycos.de/nubkiddie/christy_wip_15.jpg http://mitglied.lycos.de/nubkiddie/christy_wip_16.jpg


regards
jannis

[Tahl'eN]

The texture looks nice, but it makes it hard to point out the issues that are still there in the model. Her legs from about the knee down are still wonky. The muscles above the knee are too big and lumpy. There should be a smooth transition from the thigh, over the knee and to the calf. The calf should bow backward in profile.
The calf muscle needs to flow more gracefully from front to back, rather than stepping.
The ankes are too pointed, and should be lower on the outside fo the leg than the inside. The feet appeat too flat where they connect to the legs.

[LeroyBrown]

HAHA, I think the bra and panties are like three sizes to small.

[Pillboxx]

I think the head looks great. But...did you mirror that texture on the face? It looks strange with identical marks on both sides, below the mouth.

The arms look a little short too.

But overall, good job.

[sati]

i think the face is pretty good but the first 2 things i notice are the nipples seem very extreme for the material that is covering them and the feet are a bit too small. Generally the rule of thumb is that the feet are the same length as the forearm. Otherwise i think it is coming along pretty well, keep up the good work.

[j_mac]

her boob looks like its slipping out. you may want to adress that... lol ! i joke! i joke!

shes looking very good. i have a small (or large) issue with her big nipples. they look almost fake. maybe give some thought to shrinking them up a bit.

her face looks awsome.

cheers.

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