:animation:-gunner-horohoro

[Denb]

The download-speed is really poor from where I'm online. Do you have a mirror?

[horoXhoro]

sorry for inconvienience, i have no mirror:blush:

[muckymouse]

You need a mirror, that took way too long to download. Oh well. I liked it. Some of the character animation was a little iffy(the part where he throws away the first two guns), but it had quality camera work and flowed well. THe company name should stay up there a little longer IMO, it goes by too quick to read.

Awsome work!:beer:

=RUnyon:surprised

[horoXhoro]

thanx for ur advise... hehe..i dunno how to do mirror?

[leekhangwei]

the connection speed wasnt that slow afterall, cos i have tried downloading it, it was quite fast though. BTW nice animation and i agree with Runyon that the character movement was abit stive. good work!!

[horoXhoro]

but my character is a mecha :p ....if he can act like human gesture of cos it will be great...!

i'll produce another story content for him:)

more feedback pls...:bounce:

[horoXhoro]

is anyone know where can get gundam and evangelion blue print.? i can wait to model them...
:drool:

[HenningK]

Neat. good quick action. Trouble spots are the parts where he throws away the first two guns (too slow) the first shot of the piece.. (the two steps have no weight or bounce or anything), and the trick to get back on his feet (too floaty). It seems like the movie cuts to black too soon (can barely read it, like Runyon said)... seems like a mistake.
its exciting, i like it, good editing definitely,
love,hen

[horoXhoro]

thanx to henningK,khangwei and Runyon for giving me feedback.....:thumbsup:

how if i cut the walking scene and fr the throwing the 1st two gun make it faster? it is will look better?

and the end there actually haven't finish the composition of my company logo...any idea.,

[Shaykai]

hahah i loved him firing the gatling gun and then it getting out of control :) excellent :)

Shaykai

[leekhangwei]

ya man, this is really nice. Tell us more about this character, and what he shooting with a thinkscape word coming out in the enc.

[3D-ima Green]

haha! :D thats a funny Robot.. i loved the animation :D

great work there!

[horoXhoro]

thanx for giving such a happy feedback - 3D-ima Green,

i know this animation didn't animated nicely...almost one year i didn't touch character animation:blush:

and i uploading the complete one now....the end part i think the transition have problem..erm...:shrug:

[The_Magician]

... quicktime doesn't recognise the file?

[grouchy_smurf]

hehe i was there checkin out this animation in process each day lol :wavey:

anyways i think he could've had more ammo in the first 2 "socoms" ;) hehe plus there's sumthing about the reflection on his face too...err if he even has one that is...but it's nth much anyways...

overall an 8/10!! :thumbsup:

[leekhangwei]

Originally posted by The_Magician
... quicktime doesn't recognise the file?

is a mpg4 quicktime, u need at least quicktime 6 to play it

[SkullboX]

It's a pretty cool short. Technically it all looked very well done. Nice models, textures and rendering. The main flaw of this short though, is in my opinion the animation itself. There is no anticipation or timing at all. The animation just plays in one pace. The character comes forward, draws guns, shoots, throws guns one by one away, grabs another gun, etc, there is no motivation at all.

Instead try some anticipation to emphasis the important parts. When the character walks up, have him stand still and maybe show a shot at the wall and character, so we know where he is. Then after tha short pause, draw the guns, shoot, throw both guns away in one motion (would you throw each away individually?) have him pause a bit as well, then pull up the chaingun. Same story for the rocketlauncher.

As far as reference for EVA's in concerned, try out some of Gainax's 'groundwork of evangelion' books, which should include character concepts including detailed blueprints for EVA's, but I'm sure there are scan's/pics of those on the web as well.

Good luck with those, and regardless of my comments, very nice work on the short.

[horoXhoro]

agreed ur comments thanx dude,:beer:

hope the next animation for my character will improve,
sigh~ have to study alot of animation, and camera and scee shot...by the way his name is "Aka" i have model him for my school project last two years..but it's in cell shaded...
i also will modify detailing on the body part and learn IK..aargh..
IK is hard to setup...

this animation i key frame part by part,,hehe:cry:

i really appreaciate ur comments arigato~

[skyeywei]

good work ! :)
like it.......

[horoXhoro]

really sorry for inconvienience....my server down

for those are about to view my work....pls visit later

i going to fix back the link page....i apologize:wavey:

[horoXhoro]

finally my webpage link is back, and i have upload a smaller quicktime movie for easy to download..enjoy...

chinese new year is coming later i'll upload a version which for celebrate chinese new year....of cos happy chinese new to all of you

[looloo]

The shading and lighting is highly completed, the camera timing and character animation has improved so much as well ! well done !:thumbsup: Here is some personal suggestion for the Gatring gun firing scene, may insert different camera angle fast cut in the same firing sequence to make more impact. heh, dont forget our Kamen kick and punch ah... !!! Cheer, horoXhoro !

[horoXhoro]

:beer: kamen raider will coming soon on this july ....hehee
:thumbsup:

[Creature]

The download really is quite slow - 3kb/s on a DSL line. Estimated 2 hours to download - I'm not patient enough, sorry

[kilroy]

:thumbsup: pretty cool

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