Nocturne

[wildsheepchase]

I think you should zoom in a little more on your subject....there's a lot of empty space on the page and the piano player is so small, it's hard to make out any details on him. I'm also wondering if that's a cloud in the sky above him....if so, I think there needs to be a few more of them;)
It's a nice concept, though....you should keep updating:thumbsup:

[floatingrunner]

thx for the tip.. yea, i kinda saw that after the post... (was hoping that no one would see that ;P just kidding -- good eye)

yea, think you can help me a little.... i am also trying to capture the roof top landscape.... yet keep the proportion.
any suggestions??


thank you

[wildsheepchase]

I think you can zoom in quite a bit, before you begin to lose the idea that it's on a rooftop. You could push the idea even more by adding more detail to the roof on the left hand side or by adding a chimney in the background. You could also shift the perspective so that you can see what's surrounding the house on the ground....smaller buildings, trees, etc.
It really depends on what you're going for..
Have fun, I'll watch for the update
:)

[floatingrunner]

HELP.. i don't know where to start to make the correction.

i am BAD at that. not that the pic look ok to me, it look terrible. but i just don't see it.

i have darkened the lines and added more details. and slight colors, but there are still things missing (not going to show the improved work) but probably start from this pic again.

n e suggestions?

(i don't know how to mkae it 3/4 either!!)

[floatingrunner]

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