blankslatejoe
06-21-2002, 01:29 PM
if that subject doesn't get some people to stop in, then i dont know what will... whatdya guys think? about an hours worth of work(including inking)
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blankslatejoe
06-21-2002, 02:01 PM
and a detail
blankslatejoe
06-21-2002, 02:49 PM
ok... next time ill have to put [nudity] up in the subject. she is kinda nekkid, for a robot... maybe that'll work.
hypercube
06-21-2002, 04:02 PM
hahaha..actually with a title like that I didn't expect it to really BE that. :D
Looking pretty cool..nice closeup. I draw like a head injury outpatient mostly, but main thing I'd say at the moment is it seems odd around the right shoulder. (her right, our left)
Not too sure about what's going on around the head/face, and a lot of the finer detail seems to be getting lost against the much thicker lines..but that could come out when colored.
Or is this a concept for a 3D char? That could be pretty cool.
Anyway, saw that and had to comment..heh.
Sexy killer lesbian robot girl with guns, knives, monkey lip, chains, whips. [nudity] [xxx].
Looking pretty cool..nice closeup. I draw like a head injury outpatient mostly, but main thing I'd say at the moment is it seems odd around the right shoulder. (her right, our left)
Not too sure about what's going on around the head/face, and a lot of the finer detail seems to be getting lost against the much thicker lines..but that could come out when colored.
Or is this a concept for a 3D char? That could be pretty cool.
Anyway, saw that and had to comment..heh.
Sexy killer lesbian robot girl with guns, knives, monkey lip, chains, whips. [nudity] [xxx].
blankslatejoe
06-21-2002, 04:11 PM
Heehee, yeah, i sure know how to deliver, dont i?
The right shoulder may be in a little too close to her body, now that you mention it, I never noticed it before.
As for the face, well, that was a disater, she didn't have a mask origonally, let's just say her face looked a little tooooooo monkeyish at first. Black ink saves the day again!!! Next time i'll do better.
thanks for the crit, i appreciate it. What's the best way to convince people to stop in and comment? Good or bad, any crits are helpful.
I thought for sure the with guns and knives and monkey lip subject would have done it... :) :) :)
The right shoulder may be in a little too close to her body, now that you mention it, I never noticed it before.
As for the face, well, that was a disater, she didn't have a mask origonally, let's just say her face looked a little tooooooo monkeyish at first. Black ink saves the day again!!! Next time i'll do better.
thanks for the crit, i appreciate it. What's the best way to convince people to stop in and comment? Good or bad, any crits are helpful.
I thought for sure the with guns and knives and monkey lip subject would have done it... :) :) :)
Sevarf2
06-21-2002, 04:27 PM
Interesting. Remind me Alita by Yukito Kishiro
blankslatejoe
06-21-2002, 04:30 PM
I just did a search on the name in yahoo. I think i can see what you mean, judging from the book covers. Is this a good or a bad resemblance?
Sevarf2
06-21-2002, 07:01 PM
Your work is a good restyling but I think your character needs some adjustment especially in face and torso.
blankslatejoe
06-21-2002, 07:17 PM
duely noted, i'll work on that for my next pic. the next one will be much more developed. I'm picking up some anatomy books tonight, Thanks guys for the crits!
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