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garyturner
01-05-2004, 03:46 PM
maya render/poly modelling
http://www.gary-cg.com/pics/xtrail_a_web.jpg



http://www.gary-cg.com/pics/xtrail_b_web.jpg

LordIron2k
01-05-2004, 04:59 PM
i think the car looks wrong .

angel
01-05-2004, 05:56 PM
Originally posted by LordIron2k
i think the car looks wrong .

what do you mean? wrong? how?
he, why even bother posting? don't take it personal but your post is rather vague and doesn't help the author one bit.

I think the vertical shot works better. You might want to revise the grey rocks; at first look I thought it was water... humm, water there would probably enhance the shot since it has a river scene feel to it.

AndrewTanousis
01-05-2004, 07:18 PM
i checked out some photos of the x-trail....your model is pretty accurate. I dont think it looks wrong at all. The only thing id say is try and round it off more around the sides, roof and front. I like both shots, nice backgrounds. Have u modelled the interior? if you make the glass transparent and give us an inside view that would do it for me. Well done

Dennispls
01-05-2004, 07:21 PM
looks pretty good
did u use blueprints for this
if u did would you pm me about to send me the blueprints:p
thx

garyturner
01-05-2004, 09:13 PM
thanks

sorry Dennispls I dindn t use blueprints, only pics==>thanks google :p

garyturner
01-05-2004, 10:25 PM
some wires

http://www.gary-cg.com/pics/xtrail_wire2.jpg
http://www.gary-cg.com/pics/xtrail_wire1.jpg

maruku
01-07-2004, 08:47 PM
wouahou. great job.
the glass may be too gray.
:bounce: :bounce:

francoistarlier
01-07-2004, 09:55 PM
I think that's a great job !!! Like I said to Aline, the shape of the car maybe looks wierd but actually I think that's the camera angle that want that !
But I'm totaly agree with SNoWs, your road looks like water !

Oui je sais j'aurais pu écrire en Français mais bon .... :p

Skyraider3D
01-07-2004, 10:36 PM
I have to agree with LordIron2K. Even though the model and images are nice, the car simply looks wrong. I can't exactly put my finger on it, but the overall shape is too boxy I believe. My brother in law has an X-Trail and it looks quite different somehow.
Using blueprints is good, but by matching up top/side/front views you still don't automatically get an accurate model. You need lots of photographs too.
The paint finish is pretty nice though and quite close to the real thing.

garyturner
01-09-2004, 08:57 AM
thanks for critics, i will make a better work on the next car :p (promise)

Kel Solaar
01-09-2004, 09:54 AM
Nice work gary :)

ring man
01-09-2004, 10:23 AM
very nice, great job gary:applause: :applause:

ring man
01-09-2004, 10:29 AM
very nice car, great job Gary
:applause: :applause:

garyturner
01-09-2004, 06:51 PM
thanks guys :blush: :))

GARA
01-09-2004, 06:55 PM
nice, i like the mood given off by the atmosphere as much as the model work... The model is nicely made imo, color render is sweet also...only thing i dont get is the positioning of the tyre trails...

is the car a backward drive??

:)
nice piece

Qdx
01-09-2004, 07:40 PM
The modeling is top notch:bowdown:
Only crit I can give is tthat the windows should be more reflective. Also, the hood looks too dark but I'm not sure if it's supposed to be like that

anthalis
01-09-2004, 08:24 PM
It's a pity which the clouds do not reflect in the glasses
Good continuation ;)

MUzza
01-10-2004, 04:33 AM
It's too flat, theres no curves to the car. Just seems to flat for what it is. It seems to have regressed the progression of 4x4's.

Try more curses on the frame and chasis. There doesn't seem to be any depth to the car either maybe thats to do with the flatness of it

garyturner
01-10-2004, 01:58 PM
thanks
i ve to work a lot to get a better pic

Shellow
01-10-2004, 04:31 PM
Salut Gary c'est Shellcom de 3Dvf, elle est pas mal ta caisse ,comme l'as dit je sait plus qui ,elle n'as pas l'air d'avoir les même proportion que l'original mais c'est bien quand même !!

childplay
01-10-2004, 05:03 PM
nice image....

maybe,, just to improve glass material a little bit.

all the best
Nikola Drincic

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