character_lil'boy

[old]

There are some strange black lines in the face and the nose doesn't look normal. I would erase some of the black lines and work on the nose. Colors are nice.

[carakong]

Colours are quite nice, I would agree with [ old ] on trying to adjust the proportions of the face, you could just keep the black lines though and concentrate on readjusting the shape

[lstarrr]

thx...u r totally right.... i played just a lil' bit with the colores n fixed the nose , hope u like it.
http://www.8ung.at/lstarrr_gfx/bilder/lil_boy4.jpg

[carakong]

Hey! that looks much better, especially with the colours, b4 the linework wasn't very clear because th image was so dark but no i can see the linework, it's cool! i like the sketchy style, it's eye candy!!!keep posting!

[pyraxis]

Interesting concept. But he looks far too old to be a little boy. More hair, take out the wrinkles at the edges of the eyes and the creases coming down from the corners of the nose. Maybe make the shoulders a little narrower too, especially his left.

[gnomonguru]

Maybe some more contrast would help in the face for making him look more like a boy, he looked more like a grown up than a boy, interesting angle to will make it a lil harder to make him look young without proportion references.

[lstarrr]

thx guys!!
i think u r right with his wrinkles and the hairs..etc. he looks a lil bit to old... may i can fix it.. i will try it today
i 'll post the result...
have a nice weekend

[lstarrr]

sooo faster like i thought....
removed some mistakes!!

http://www.8ung.at/lstarrr_gfx/bilder/black_boy_final.jpg

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