First post here! C&C on Photorealism

[Juzz]

too blurry shadows. Otherwise a pretty good attempt.

[The Armenian]

Not bad, looks pretty photorealistic.

The lighting is good. Is it a GI render? The only thing that could use some improvement is the ground texture. Also, as already mentioned, shadows should be less blurry. With that lighting, the shadows should look a bit stronger.

Good job so far. I really like the modeling.

[4 low]

The biggest thing that stands out to me, aside from what was already mentioned, is the chairs. They are perfectly lined up with each other, and with the table. Space them out unevenly, and don't have them lined up perfectly with anything. Other than that, it looks great.

[Zero One 010110]

Thanks guys, and i will like to say that, this model was provided form the evermotion forum, it was for a little contest there so i didn't want to change almost nothing on the modeling, i believe that is from a guy/firm tamizo, but im not really sure.

As for the illumination, its both, a GI and Photon map, there's actually a lot of light coming in from the windows, as i post in this other shot, but anyways, i still do think that the lack of shadows from the chair's in the ground is hurting the shot, as for the chrome material that actually came out white.

Here's the other shot i didn't post before, it has so many things that i wanted to change, but i runned out of time, so this is what i got in the time given. But on a second thought, C&C are always good pointers.

BTW, i just got Photoshop CS 8, and everything's fine, but i have installed it on 2 different computers and in both is like i dont have a keyboard, exept for the numerical inputs, nothing else works, someone knows why?

http://www.smartgroups.com/picvault/18654810.jpg

Thanks guys for the comments....cya

[Zero One 010110]

Nevermind about the CS problem, i just uninstalled it, and reinstalled it again (with no other program running at the time) and the problem's gone

[bastiaan]

how many pounds do those chairs need to hold?

[Garma]

Originally posted by The Armenian
The lighting is good. Is it a GI render?

I don't agree I'm afraid. The lighting is too evenly spaced around the room. There are almost no darker places. This is also due to the shadows, fix them.

pretty good start.

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