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Jaroslav
05-21-2013, 08:35 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g44/504544/504544_1369168537_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g44/504544/504544_1369168537_large.jpg)

Title: Absolut vodka
Name: Jaroslav Hach
Country: Czech Republic
Software: CINEMA 4D, Photoshop

Creation of Absolut vodka in Cinema 4D.

AJ1
05-23-2013, 11:38 PM
Hey man,

did you model the bottle so it has the correct thickness? Is the fluid inside a separate object? Your refraction looks off.

You've also got some proportion issues with your bottle. The cap is too big, and the base and neck of the bottle look unrefined.

There is also no need for the image to be wider than is tall, especially when your subject is taller than it is wide. I would crop the edges of your image.

Sorry to be harsh. With just a little more work, you could really improve this image.

-AJ

Jaroslav
05-24-2013, 10:10 AM
Hello :)

The dimensions of the cylinder to me quite by surprise. Bottle I modeled upon the original photos

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=482801215114292&set=pb.398058353588579.-2207520000.1369390098.&type=3&theater

When it shifts to the model and dimensions match. Something I try to improve'll send you aa second result

reverseengineering
05-25-2013, 12:38 AM
Nice. I like how the contents of the bottle matches the background. It enhances it.

ZIXIONG
05-25-2013, 03:59 AM
What can we say except "WOW",nice work!

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