Apple & Cherry.

[JCGA]

It looks great but I think it could go a bit further with some minor tweaking. One thing you could try is to add a bit of DOF. It would help to sell the illusion of a photo taken at that distance.
Also, there's something strange going on with the shadow of the stem (is that what it's called?) on the top of the nearest apple, it looks like it's floating.

Keep up the good work.

[natrule]

don't know if the fruit over in India is any different to the rest of the world but the fruit looks weird man...

:p

edit: that stem shadow needs fixing too

[mattmos]

Looking carefully all the shadows of the stems look like they're floating. The cherries are nearly there but the speckled pattern is very off-putting - making it a lot finer/less obtrusive would help. The bump on the leaves is too much and I feel that they need a more general specular. Lastly as noted before depth of field would really help. Please consider these changes as the image is nicely framed and the colours work well, could have a really nice final image...

[MaxGuru]

oh ok .. thanks very much.. will make changes to bump on leave and texture of cherries.... also i will add some dof. now what i am confused aboutt as you are are.. i dont know the shadows of stem are floating.. nothing is wrong with the lights or its settings.. when i render the same this with scanline renderer atheshadwows come perfect.. but then put on final render.. it makes them float... let me see how i can make it more better.. also i wantto say that the fruits all over the world very.. we have diffrent kind of varity of apples here in india itself so the textures will definately.. differe from country to country. these r the most expensive apples available in india. and are export to some countries even.. and anyway thaknx for a lot of help. will be taking some time to upgrade the image.. as i am out of town and off from work... bye everyone.. happy christmas and a very happy new year.. tak care al.. and have a blast this new year, bye bye

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