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swag
12-12-2003, 07:13 PM
hi, here is a new character "bad guy" he is a low poly char 2460 poly faces made with wings 3d and maya+BPT
now he is free for criticize

http://www.swag3d.com/cgtalk/butcher07.jpg

swag
12-13-2003, 08:23 PM
please :cry:

cgg
12-13-2003, 08:45 PM
hi swag sup ? :) i see you are working very hard the last couple of weeks :buttrock:
very nice work on this dude , good textures :thumbsup:
only one "bad" thing to say about it , he does not look like a bad dude , he got "good guy" eyes even "sad guy" eyes, the rest of the model is sure bad guy :wip:

Zoomie
12-13-2003, 08:48 PM
well....if you really want :D

i think he looks cool, but not bad enough... his eyes are too friendly...another thing is that he should have some scars

the Muffin Man
12-13-2003, 10:36 PM
cool model. He does look like a rather lost good guy.. :) but that's cool. His belleyy seems a bit off though, it should be hanging down over his pants more?

NelsonInomvan
12-13-2003, 11:33 PM
your model is good but if you fix some little bugs it'll be very good. You can start with the crits above coz your eyes are looking.. well they are not bad.

Another thing that bothers me is the way you made the torso and the rest of the body looks very thin. I mean that now your model looks like he is fit but has a big belly... kinda wierd in my opinion. Try to make the had and the arms a little fat and you'll fix the problem. And if you can make some details on him... chains, jewery and etc

and show us the wire

MunCHeR
12-13-2003, 11:41 PM
dude, yeah doesnt look bad enough, think he looks like he still lives with his mum:surprised

two things, his gut doesnt look realistic at all(trust me i have one) it should sag down more, looks kinda squarish.And hos shoulder is all wrong the deltoid should overlap his biceps, nice job on the texturing though.

Cheers

MunCH

swag
12-14-2003, 01:16 AM
cgg i think the texture are weak but nice to hear u like them
yeh he looks a little bit dull and he looks sad i think you take pity on him but this can change take care - thanks

Zoomie some scars ... i think about it ...thanks

the Muffin Man i try it thanks

Atmos_Fear he has some problems with drinking beer :) my goal is 2500 polys
so there is no polys for extras - thanks

MunCHeR i try to fix it - the deltoid should overlap his biceps cause if i rigg him it helps me keep hold the volume on the shoulder - thanks

here sone wire shots
http://www.swag3d.com/cgtalk/butcher08.jpg
http://www.swag3d.com/cgtalk/butcher09.jpg

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