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Sheepshooter
12-12-2003, 04:05 PM
hi...
as u see im new around here.
i have my work from a week ago....
the work is a glass of water or whatever tropic juice.
any way... i model it in bryce... and render the pic in photo shop and bryce...
hope u like it...

*this is my first serious work*
:D

http://kuchi.tiptip.co.il/fileupload/store/hawaii.jpg

http://server4.uploadit.org/files2/101203-stragh.jpg

http://server4.uploadit.org/files2/101203-hawaii%203.jpg

http://server4.uploadit.org/files2/101203-hawaii%202.jpg

sorry for my english... hope u like it :thumbsup:

ReSeT
12-13-2003, 10:37 AM
Hi there!

I think, there's a lot of work to do.

Some of my impressions:

-The glass would never be so thick, how would you drink out of it? Try to improve the glass material, actually I can't see any refraction.

- The table texture is a real mess and it is too repetitive, human eyes don't like this.

-Try to change the texture alignment on the edges and on wood you absolutely have to use bump maps, since it has a surface structure and is not totally flat.

Hope that helps

GreetZ

Dane

Sheepshooter
12-13-2003, 01:55 PM
thx.... i will try to do my best...

the glass is thick... but not so thick...
the table is a secondary object.... i focus on the gkass...
the glass have a reflection .... i think this is ok... coz more reflection will make it like mirror...

sorry for the english again

Quacker
12-13-2003, 09:06 PM
The glass would never be so thick, how would you drink out of it?

The straw, of course :)

Good for starters, but the glass does need some work. If I'm not mistaken, when you look at glass, it refracts in a curvature way...take the 2nd pic for example. The middle-top of the glass just refracts the table ina straight line.

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