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billconan
12-06-2003, 08:35 AM
Hey there!
It's my new head model.
I'm a beginner on this but have tried my best.
Your advice is badly needed so that I can fix her better!
Thank you!!

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/11/29/1997294-tou-embed.jpg

billconan
12-06-2003, 08:40 AM
textured:

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/12/06/2024817-skin-embed.jpg

XYZRGB
12-06-2003, 10:42 AM
Hello billconan. May we see some images from the front and side ? Right now it is a little hard to tell what is 'off' with the model.

Right away, I can see that that the ears are looking very good. Most people have difficulty with ears, but you have modeled them very well.

Since this is a female ( right ?) have you considered making the lips fuller ? One feature that women seem to have over men is fuller lips

Have you considered making the nose slightly smaller from the side view ? Right now it is very long and 'pointy'.

I understand that this is a WIP, but the first thing that I saw that threw off the image was the white of her eyes. ( They are way too bright ) Personally, I would use an image map for the eyes.

Overall it is coming along very well. great job so far - especially those ears .

:thumbsup:

billconan
12-07-2003, 07:51 AM
Hi,thank you,Vegan.
I have not textured the eye balls.They are just two bright substitutes.
Here I show you some picture from the front:
http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/12/07/2027644-dfh-embed.jpg
Thank you again!!

XYZRGB
12-07-2003, 01:58 PM
Overall, the model looks very good so far.
Can you post some wireframe and shaded views ? The 'toon views are a little hard to see detail with.

The lips look fine now. I'm not sure if you made any changes or not, but they look good.

I think you might want to focus your attention on her eyes and her jaw.
The eyes need a little refinement - like in the area where the tear ducts are. Her brow seems to to tense right now - almost as if she is angry.
As far as the jaw area, the main problem area that i see is where it meets the neck.

It is looking good so far. Good work:thumbsup:

XYZRGB
12-07-2003, 02:08 PM
After looking at your images again, I think the main thing that this model needs, is for the eyes to be moved down, tilted slightly ( right now they slant downwards ) and moved slightly forwards in the side view.
The head does seem a little swollen ( front view )around where the ears are.

Again, looking good though :thumbsup:

eYadNesS
12-07-2003, 08:03 PM
Could you post wires?! thanks...

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