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taylor
01-21-2002, 11:33 AM
hey everyone! i've been away from the boaards lately. busy on a new short. i've got a new animation and i was wondering if anyone could give me a crit? i'm going to tweek the tail animation. any feedback is always apreciated. thanks as always.

http://www.hi-fi-lo-fi.com/taylor/anim/jan_.mpg

vertex
01-21-2002, 12:44 PM
Looking very smooth, great choice of sketch to do, the animation is looking really good, what 3d package and character rigging system are you using.

some very nice touches, I like th hiding of the hammer and nail behind his back.

Can't wait to see more.

Vertex

taylor
01-21-2002, 12:54 PM
thanks! it's max and character studio. (freeform!) i'm glad you enjoyed it!

Daxx
01-21-2002, 01:32 PM
I'm a Jason Taylor Fan ^_^

taylor
01-21-2002, 01:44 PM
i'm a fan of your pirate id pic! lol

3dflasher
01-21-2002, 02:54 PM
Hey the new skit for the 10 second club. Very nice entry as always Taylor. Looks great! The best part is when the shop keep throws his tools while the other is talking to him. Very unqiue choice of interaction between them.


Monty Python Rox!!!

da_duke
01-21-2002, 03:04 PM
really funny, i like the smooth motions.

Taoizm
01-21-2002, 03:39 PM
Really great piece. I liked the part where the shop keeper got rid of the tools while the John Cleese character was looking away, but for my taste that wasn't exagerated enough. Maybe the customer could turn away more (almost 180) and have the shop keeper be a little more obvious to the audience that he's getting rid of the evidence. just my 2 cents. :D Awesome works as always. :) :)

pascal_blanche
01-21-2002, 05:36 PM
the pink one should look more at is dead perrot (I loove this sketch) and just punch the desk with it but keeping it in hand, then look more closer to the feet of the perrot wich give the opportunity to the blue one to get rid of the hammer, throwing it in is back, while kipping giving interrest to the conversation... something like that.. they are lookin too much every where, you loose focus.. I know It hurts. except that, your sence of rythme and animation are really realyy realllly good!!!

underdog
01-21-2002, 05:58 PM
Thats very cool, I really like

taylor
01-22-2002, 10:56 AM
thanks for the response guys! i love getting critiques! hehe. 3d flasher: are you entering? pascal: thanks for the sugestions. are you a animator or just a 3d artist? just curious. ;)
thanks again!

pascal_blanche
01-22-2002, 05:00 PM
Animator too my friend ;)

Daxx
01-22-2002, 09:48 PM
:)

taylor
01-25-2002, 11:13 AM
thanks for the response guys! do to my busy schedule, i have made only a few changes and uploaded them. he now looks at where he is going to throw the hammer and nail once before the pink guy turns around. and i adjusted the camera a bit, to get a better comp. let me know what you think.

http://www.hi-fi-lo-fi.com/taylor/anim/jan_.mpg

AnimaLMotheR
01-27-2002, 03:59 PM
Very very nice. :)

Now do the ministry of silly walks. :D

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