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art7sayan
06-14-2002, 02:16 PM
So, like I said in the first thread, here is the same character with his high-tech armour... i'm going to show you multiple stages of it so wait & see! ...And if you have any critics, post me!!!... ;)

this is the first sketch in blue of it:
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 02:24 PM
... After scaning the pic', I put it in grey in photoshop... and print the new one...
sophist
06-14-2002, 02:26 PM
I Like his armor, it's really cool. :buttrock:

:wip: There's something odd about his left leg/foot. Did you see something or is it a prob. with my eyes? :)

Anyway, it's really cool... I hope you'll show us some more!:thumbsup:
sophist
06-14-2002, 02:28 PM
I meant RIGHT leg/foot on the previous post!!!

Sorry!:D :D :D
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 02:29 PM
...now I can do inking on it with 2 sort of pen: one to do details and the other (a felt-tip pen) to outline it...
Norante
06-14-2002, 02:34 PM
Good design, but you have a mistake in proportion there. I dont know if the armor design suggests a long mechanized arm, but I think it's a bit too long to fit your charachter's arm inside.

The legs are spread in a strange pose too, almost in Da Vinci's position ( that used to pose a chacachter when modiling in a 3d package)

Well, the design is good. Nice shaping in this armor. I wonder if you will put color or texture?
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 02:34 PM
Yes, you're right... :hmm: maybe with more details on his ankle it will be less odd... :p

So wait & see again!
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 02:37 PM
no Norante, it's because he can put his little arm on this big mechanized arm...it's not really his hand! :wavey:
Norante
06-14-2002, 03:14 PM
I thought so, but even then, I feel thats there's not enough room in there ... At least I think so
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 03:56 PM
:rolleyes:

I was thinking about something like that:
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 03:58 PM
so he can control the arm with a his hand ...
It's the same thing for legs :)
ParanoidAndroid
06-14-2002, 04:01 PM
Nice!!

Dude, I love your style...it's very 21st century...keep it up! :)
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 04:12 PM
Thank you ParanoidAndroid ! Hey, you got a nice Avatar man!

" More Aliens in the world!!!" :wavey:
Titan
06-14-2002, 05:26 PM
looks good man....looking at your stuff is really inspiring me to finish some of mine...
great design...keep going!
dmcgrath
06-14-2002, 05:40 PM
The one problem with the mecha is that the legs are way too small in proportion to the upper body. He has these, great, big, huge, enormous shoulders and thes tiny feet to support all that weight. Your technique is very fluid and clean, but I recommend making the lower half of the body bigger.:D
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 06:06 PM
That's right Dmcgrath, but it's too late... :cry:

Just think that technology is more powerfull than phisik's law! lol :D
dmcgrath
06-14-2002, 07:04 PM
Thats cool, man. Besides, it's yours. You are quite talented and I know it will look great.:buttrock:
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 07:04 PM
... Ok, now that the final shape is decided, I will begin to put more little details and the color (not with my Wacom tablet 'cause I have broken it... :cry: )

wait & see!! :bounce:
ParanoidAndroid
06-14-2002, 07:05 PM
Originally posted by art7sayan
Thank you ParanoidAndroid ! Hey, you got a nice Avatar man!

" More Aliens in the world!!!" :wavey:

Lol not exactly my best work. ;)
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 07:18 PM
Here you can see that I have corrected the mistake in the right feet ... I think that the axis was weird :hmm:
art7sayan
06-14-2002, 07:22 PM
Thanks to Titan and Dmcgrath! I will do my best ! :xtreme:

ParanoidAndroid, I'm with you little Alien!!! :D
dmcgrath
06-15-2002, 04:22 AM
yes you are right, that looks much better,



:rolleyes: aliens.... hehe:rolleyes:
art7sayan
06-19-2002, 05:53 AM
...and the final pic' with color! :D

Just some marker and a lil' bit of photoshop's effect!

I hope that it will look good for you! :wavey:

So it's the end for this character concept.

C&C please!!!! ;)
art7sayan
06-19-2002, 06:06 AM
:wavey:
art7sayan
06-19-2002, 06:10 AM
:wavey:
art7sayan
06-19-2002, 12:18 PM
Lowrez but a bigger image :
art7sayan
06-20-2002, 02:33 AM
You don't like it? Ok...I will begin another pic ... :shrug:
Cockofthewok
06-20-2002, 03:58 AM
Cool. so it's kinda like a landmate from Appleseed just with the head sticking out.
art7sayan
06-20-2002, 04:53 AM
yes, I really like this kind of story, but that wasn't my reference his time. :thumbsup:
art7sayan
06-20-2002, 04:54 AM
"...this time" :p
sophist
06-20-2002, 04:55 PM
Hey,

I think the final version has really good quality. :applause:

The right foot looks much better now.

Lighting renders look good, but could have some more colors...

Just the outlines from both feet... They are thick if compared with the rest of the body. Maybe you could give uniform treatment in all your picture.

Conclusion: I like it. Great job! :thumbsup:
art7sayan
06-21-2002, 02:54 AM
thank you Sophist :beer:

Yes, you're right, it could have some more colors on it but, this pic got a really bad quality and isn't like the original (about contrast and colors) ...and it's made with marker (and not with a tablet... :cry: ) and so contrast is less important...sorry :shrug: ...

The outline on foot was made because I was wondering if it will good to put it on the whole character...but maybe it won't be really good with it (this kind of outline could "parasite" the draw)!

Anyway, Thx!
art7sayan
06-30-2002, 03:55 AM
:wavey:

Like I said in "character design", you will find here the final pic' of this concept...
art7sayan
06-30-2002, 03:56 AM
...(oops), not this one!...
art7sayan
06-30-2002, 03:59 AM
sorry ! :p
art7sayan
06-30-2002, 04:01 AM
:wavey:
art7sayan
06-30-2002, 10:56 AM
Now I will try to put some color with photoshop (and my lil' mouse... :cry: )
jeroentje
06-30-2002, 11:21 AM
Man! I love that bad-guy!
Can't wait to see it colored... You have a great personal style! Are you planning a complete story with those characters?

jeroentje
art7sayan
06-30-2002, 11:37 AM
Yes Jeroentje, I will try...I have the story but it will take a lot of time to do it ( so complex!! lol) ...maybe during these holydays I will try to begin (In this case, I will post some pages) :thumbsup:

:beer:
jeroentje
06-30-2002, 11:46 AM
Please do, I'm looking foward to it.
jeroentje
Psycho Ken
06-30-2002, 01:42 PM
Hey man~i like ur style,so u like to draw an animation too? i also like to draw some animation too~he he he tat's my subject when i'm in college b4~ :)
Ken.02
art7sayan
06-30-2002, 03:00 PM
No Ken, it's about a comic strip's story...I didn't learned how to make animation ...but it will be so cool to learn it! :rolleyes:

ps: Hey, you haven't replyed to my private messages!! What's the meaning of "icq" ? :shrug:
art7sayan
07-01-2002, 05:48 AM
About one hour with my lil' mouse & Photoshop :wavey: (lowrez)
Stygian
07-02-2002, 02:26 AM
so are we gonna get to see the other character inked and colored I think the smart looking guy is my favorite so far.

love em all though keep up the great work .
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