Going fishing

[STRAT]

well, texture wise it looks pretty good, but you need serious work to the lighting of the scene.

at the moment the objects look floating off the boards.
this is because your shadow depth is wrong and all flat looking. no defenition to it.

increase the shadow density 10 fold, move the light higher up in the sky, make the bias to 1%, and put in some GI. this will really anchor your scene.

[l_farley13_l]

mm just quickly dirty the snene up - the wood bump looks a bit hight, and the image looks a bit lowres as well - use some produral maps mix w/ it to gain that resolution, a small bit of distortion could work. If you feel like it - displacemet would also work quite well.

Dito on the cork etc. The metal really needs some resurfacing- scratches are a must, and the spec should be smaller - also add some fresnel effect to the green paint.

see you,

Farley13

[randyrives]

Thanks for the great suggestions. I will try to include them in my next render.


---Randy R

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