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11-27-2003, 05:25 PM
11-27-2003, 05:41 PM
11-27-2003, 06:16 PM
Looks good. A little bit to clean imo. The back indicator are looking like cigarettes :)
Could you post an wire?
*Edit: hmm, I dont mean clean... Dunno how to describe it...*
11-27-2003, 11:51 PM
needs a bit more work though
the rear lights
i think u should add a bit more reflection to the window glass
and lower ur diffuse value on the front headlight
also the tires r a bit grey
maybe make them a bit darker?
11-28-2003, 01:01 AM
11-30-2003, 12:19 PM
11-30-2003, 02:04 PM
great work! i really like it!:thumbsup:
i suggest that u should add some extra deatils to the head-lights,signal lights and to the wheels(wheels are really good. but try adding ur own ideas and modify it, if u like)
anyways i really love it! go on man!:beer:
11-30-2003, 03:38 PM
hey, these new pics are looking great! Perhaps a bit too much reflection. Try only 50% reflection! But hey, I´m just a nub in car modeling. I´m trying to model a m3 @the moment but I hope I can help a bit!
12-04-2003, 02:19 PM
12-04-2003, 02:21 PM
12-04-2003, 03:07 PM
well I was thinking of beating this shit out of this... but then i saw the red and blue ones.. so now i am just going to say...
1) is this your 1st car you did....
2) I want your pain recipe for the red and blue..
3) it is an over good car... but I think you can detail some of it better...
4) good work..
there is usually about 100 of those so... one day I will give ya a good crit but i just :love: the red and blue renders... just cool...
03-06-2004, 12:42 PM
03-06-2004, 10:40 PM
03-07-2004, 05:04 AM
The seats are too shiny.
03-07-2004, 05:32 AM
Biggest crit IMO is proportions. The body seems OK. But the seats look to big/shape is off. Wheels look really big, unless its JayZ's Viper :D
But its a good start, keep plugging away and find more reference pics I think would help ya.
03-08-2004, 03:22 AM
these are bloody awesome well done mate
03-08-2004, 07:43 AM
:applause: I like your blue with white vertical stripe the best out of all your color modifications.
Also, I just observed how your front tires are to close to the top; I think there should be more space between your front tires and the edge of the fender.
dunno,but your model needs much more details, fyi lights are too simple,door handles are missing, front mudguard seems to be too sharp-edged on the upper side,seats are too big imo, windshield wipers missing too, rims looks simple, but it's just a bad material used maybe, but car paint is really bad...it's still WIP for me.. but i hope,you'll work on that and it may yet have a happy ending.. so, good luck man, you can do it much better man, i know it..
03-09-2004, 06:19 PM
*jups in and speeds off*
good stuff man:thumbsup:
04-20-2004, 03:00 PM
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