vehicle: dodge viper

[mayhemation]

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[TheHellmaster]

Looks good. A little bit to clean imo. The back indicator are looking like cigarettes :)

Could you post an wire?

TheHellmaster

*Edit: hmm, I dont mean clean... Dunno how to describe it...*

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[naga]

nice!
needs a bit more work though
the rear lights
i think u should add a bit more reflection to the window glass
and lower ur diffuse value on the front headlight
also the tires r a bit grey
maybe make them a bit darker?

[mayhemation]

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[charithmax]

great work! i really like it!:thumbsup:

i suggest that u should add some extra deatils to the head-lights,signal lights and to the wheels(wheels are really good. but try adding ur own ideas and modify it, if u like)

anyways i really love it! go on man!:beer:

[TheHellmaster]

hey, these new pics are looking great! Perhaps a bit too much reflection. Try only 50% reflection! But hey, I´m just a nub in car modeling. I´m trying to model a m3 @the moment but I hope I can help a bit!

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[DeathGoth]

well I was thinking of beating this shit out of this... but then i saw the red and blue ones.. so now i am just going to say...

1) is this your 1st car you did....
2) I want your pain recipe for the red and blue..
3) it is an over good car... but I think you can detail some of it better...
4) good work..

there is usually about 100 of those so... one day I will give ya a good crit but i just :love: the red and blue renders... just cool...

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[SammyB]

The seats are too shiny.

[Sly Stylz]

Biggest crit IMO is proportions. The body seems OK. But the seats look to big/shape is off. Wheels look really big, unless its JayZ's Viper :D

But its a good start, keep plugging away and find more reference pics I think would help ya.

[squiz]

these are bloody awesome well done mate

[OperaFan1981]

:applause: I like your blue with white vertical stripe the best out of all your color modifications.

Also, I just observed how your front tires are to close to the top; I think there should be more space between your front tires and the edge of the fender.

[furo]

dunno,but your model needs much more details, fyi lights are too simple,door handles are missing, front mudguard seems to be too sharp-edged on the upper side,seats are too big imo, windshield wipers missing too, rims looks simple, but it's just a bad material used maybe, but car paint is really bad...it's still WIP for me.. but i hope,you'll work on that and it may yet have a happy ending.. so, good luck man, you can do it much better man, i know it..

[Fire_Master...]

whoohoo!
*jups in and speeds off*
good stuff man:thumbsup:

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