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tompa
11-26-2003, 06:02 PM
Hello
I'm usually more into 3D but latly I have tryed to draw a little by hand. Well this is the last thing I made... Feel free to critic and if you have some advices about drawing pleas tell me =)

http://www.koppling.com/temp/tower.jpg

Dun
11-26-2003, 06:09 PM
I dig the house(except for the green bits), the ground and the composition.

The sky doesn't really do it for me.

And the sun REALLY doesn't do it for me. Why does it have dark edges?

Also - does the shadow match up with the sun direction properly?

GFX-Arts
11-27-2003, 09:29 AM
Nice ;)

tompa
11-27-2003, 06:59 PM
Hello!

Made some changes, soo pleas responde and tell me what you think. =)

http://www.koppling.com/temp/tower_night.jpg

Cheehad
11-27-2003, 08:07 PM
the last one is very dark..draw the light into the house..and put the lamp front of the house.

3d zaaba
11-28-2003, 06:46 AM
I like second one very much.
it's simple but nice

GFX-Arts
11-28-2003, 10:52 AM
the last one is better than the first ;)

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