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MauroAccornero
11-25-2003, 02:31 PM
This is my last work with photoshop 7...I think that is nice but the black hair are too simple what do you think?

http://mauro84.altervista.org/immagini/girl2.jpg

This is the link! (http://mauro84.altervista.org/immagini/girl2.html)

MauroAccornero
11-25-2003, 09:01 PM
No one reply?There is nobody on cgtalk?mah....

OrcOYoyo
11-25-2003, 09:36 PM
Good start as far as i can tell.

You should use a much darker color for the sahdows and well highlights for the hair. cuz this way she looks like glowing.

MauroAccornero
11-25-2003, 09:37 PM
Thanks a lot

GFX-Arts
11-26-2003, 08:25 AM
Its only ok, sorry :shrug:

MauroAccornero
11-26-2003, 12:58 PM
:surprised

bustasnipe
11-27-2003, 08:27 AM
Nice work
You definately need darker shadows though.. and maybe use a ref pic of some chick next time to better understand the female anatomy... or get one of those posable wooden figures.

MauroAccornero
11-27-2003, 06:39 PM
thanks :bounce:

gmask
11-27-2003, 06:54 PM
Originally posted by bustasnipe
Nice work
You definately need darker shadows though.. and maybe use a ref pic of some chick next time to better understand the female anatomy... or get one of those posable wooden figures.

agreed.. plus the breasts are kind of lumpy and seem to be floating in the air.

Also I'm assuming you meant to be stylised but the proportions of the facial features and their placement is way off.. the lips are too small an dtoo low below the nose and the eyes kind of turn up in an odd way.

I kindof like the hair.. I like the outline of it but it needs some highlights or inner detail.

MauroAccornero
11-27-2003, 07:01 PM
You are right.I've done the principal picture on the first level and the color on other leves but the picture is too different from the first draw.

-Forgive my engliish is terrible :blush: -

thanks to all

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