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jamihn
11-24-2003, 06:04 PM
This is a stylized portrait of a friend. I don't really like the background much, but I ran out of ideas. Done in painter. Ideas for improvement?

http://www.jamihn.com/sketches/johnnyRockstar.jpg

OrcOYoyo
11-24-2003, 10:48 PM
I like the picture :bounce: :D
The lights and color is cool.

Maybe the neck could be a little broader and shorter.
There is something strange with the eyes maybe eyelashes would help.

Thats just what i think.
good work for sure.

keight
11-25-2003, 01:16 AM
The "something strange with the eyes" seems to be that his left eye is just too much larger than his right eye. Other than that, good caricature. I think the background is fine. Just to see what happens, try adjusting it slightly bluer.

Dun
11-25-2003, 02:46 AM
I'm certainly no pro. But to me, it looks like his left eye is also too low. Or maybe the head is skewed?

Trying doing a horizontal flip (mirror) to it and get a fresh perspective.

GFX-Arts
11-25-2003, 08:05 AM
very nice :) :thumbsup:

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