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rizob
11-21-2003, 09:15 PM
whats up all,, thought i would call this quits for now, this is my second art test for a company, (cinematics dept),, you can see the wip , antelope girl (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=93367) , it is supposed to be fantasy rpg style. let me know what you think, btw, i just rerenderd alot of peices and will uplaod to my site this weekend so check it out if you get the chance.

http://www.halfthought.com/images/ag8.jpg
http://www.halfthought.com/aghead.jpg

MonkeyJunk2003
11-21-2003, 09:55 PM
I'm liking that a lot, she doesn't look generic like most of the other models I've seen here, she looks like she has a unique personlity, cool stuff dude.

leigh
11-21-2003, 11:08 PM
Very nice work! :) I think that the shapes of the shoulders could be rounded off a little, and the skin looks a little plastic and desaturated, but otherwise she looks cool. She almost reminds me a little of the Childlike Empress from The Neverending Story.

KendoJedi
11-22-2003, 02:00 AM
The legs look like they belong on a midget. I would make them to the proper proportions if you want her to look good.

PhilOsirus
11-22-2003, 03:51 AM
I like it. But make a render with a better viewpoint because this one makes her legs look small. The skin color is nice, but maybe tone down the specularity or colorize it a bit closer to the skin's color. The fur on the boots doesn't look like it's really there but it's not bad.

GFX-Arts
11-22-2003, 08:25 AM
very nice :)

p0lym0rph
11-22-2003, 08:50 AM
nice work:thumbsup:

Shaykai
11-22-2003, 09:33 AM
http://www.incendiastudios.com/stills/blownaway.jpg

Shaykai

Man
11-22-2003, 04:58 PM
nice expressions

good work:thumbsup:



i think i feel the same as shaykay hahahahahah

JonasNoell
11-22-2003, 05:48 PM
Awesome! Frontpage! :applause:

emm
11-22-2003, 06:11 PM
good work!

I`d like to see you put some more work into the shading though,
it looks like a default blinn-shader - therefore plastic-like.

I also think that the expressions need some more work,
it`s cinda hard to buy the different emotion-states right now.

good stuff so far.

:)

-m

rizob
11-22-2003, 07:26 PM
monkeyjunk...thanks...atrulyinspiring comment.
leigh.. thanks,,,i desaturated the render for this 50's photgraphic quality but you are right about the specular levels, i played with skin tones but this silvery look seems to keep it in the fantasy realm allitle more. it makes her majik looking.
child like empress is kind of what i am going for,, most of my other models are beasts and big guys,,, this is my first feminine peice(i finally got to use the relax modifier in max) i tried to keep her fairly young looking.
kendo jedi.. there are perspective issues..i think i am using a 35mm lens.. in front view her legs actually are equal to the rest of the body...but some lengthening might make her look sexier...
phil..i agreee.. the boots need to be alittle more coarse and nappy
thanks gfx,polymorph,shaykai(nice pic) suddenly i feel handsome.
thanks,knoxville
emm....true the shading needs work(you know your 3d, a shiny blinn it is)... the expressions i knocked out in about a hour so i could get a feel for the one i wanted to use.. i mainly tried to not over exagerate them... expressions are very subtle....ill work on them...

thanks all, i hope she has charater and personality.

Garma
11-25-2003, 05:01 PM
okay, so it's finally finished :thumbsup: I followed you close, and it turned out great! Though I agree with leigh about the reflectivity, gives her a kind of plastic look.

**** from me, and a frontpage advice :cool:

dzogchen
11-25-2003, 09:59 PM
It's a cool and unique model but the abdomen area looks badly deformed.

wgreenlee1
11-26-2003, 02:34 AM
this is great..i love this stuff:buttrock:

ironist
11-26-2003, 02:44 AM
cool !!!!:beer: :beer:

rizob
12-15-2003, 05:08 AM
just thought i would trow up another render. i adjusted the spec.
and threw on the scarf
http://www.halfthought.com/images/ag9.jpg
http://www.halfthought.com/images/faces1.jpg

I-NetGraFX
12-15-2003, 11:32 AM
Excellent, :applause: , :thumbsup: and of course :beer: !

The only thing I would complain,
are those boots. They appear a bit 2D-ish IMHO.
Do u use a fur-plugin?

Keep it up!

Cheers, Daniel

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