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saturen3
11-21-2003, 08:34 PM
ali reza seifi has entered the ALIENWARE Challenge.

saturen3
12-13-2003, 01:07 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1071277622_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1071277622_large.jpg)

Hi all dear friends at cgtalk
goodmorning,
at this morning i think that worst thing for this project is to guessing
the result of the artfork before finishing it,(ofcourse for self idea).
today we have best objects and instruments with trity subjects(ideas).
ohhh,,,,
Where is a good prossecor for a good idea,
however,i`m going to do it.
and this sketch is a n idea.

saturen3
12-14-2003, 12:50 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1071363046_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1071363046_large.jpg)

dear friends
playing with colors for getting a result.

saturen3
12-14-2003, 12:58 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1071363504_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1071363504_large.jpg)

and a sky

saturen3
12-24-2003, 11:11 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072307501_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072307501_large.jpg)

inverse world.............
at all its an unknown world.

saturen3
12-27-2003, 09:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072560356_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072560356_large.jpg)

a plan that could be our environment floor

saturen3
12-27-2003, 09:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072560720_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072560720_large.jpg)

i dont know what am i doing.
but i think that this is the way of myself.
proffesionals are beter excactly.

funkymunkey90
12-28-2003, 04:55 AM
great material, its it like a bird's eye view or just a test to get the displacement right?...it looks great...now you just need to find out what to apply it to

saturen3
12-29-2003, 12:58 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072659495_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1072659495_large.jpg)

a single stone for my final scene.......

BClaw
12-29-2003, 07:17 PM
Fantastic textures! :eek: Keep up the graeat work, and good luck!

saturen3
01-07-2004, 08:57 PM
thanks dear funkey and Bclaw
i am a baby in 3d.
please pray for me.i must integrate my far concepts and now i am a pragmatist at this project and its not good.
i must work more than this.
thanks again

funkymunkey90
01-09-2004, 02:34 AM
no worries....you have a great start all you need to do is post up some more stuff finished or not...and get some opinions from people to help lead you in the right direction...i'll help in any way i can...but your texturing skills leave me in the dust right off the bat. good luck and keep going with it

saturen3
01-09-2004, 09:23 PM
Thanks dear funky90
your ideas keeps my energy in a high grade.
now my problem is my bad system.
but your words keeps me charge.
now i am seeing your works and i will put there some messages.
thaaaaaaaaanks again.

Defonten
01-10-2004, 10:21 AM
Wow! :eek: Cool! Can't wait to C FR :thumbsup:

saturen3
01-10-2004, 12:30 PM
:beer: time limitation
i must hurry up.thanks dear defonten:cry:

BClaw
01-10-2004, 11:44 PM
Yeah, get your image done, and don't sell yourself short! :applause: What I've seen so far is incredible! :bowdown: Good luck on the final image! :arteest:

saturen3
01-11-2004, 07:03 AM
woooooooooow:scream:
thanks dear Bclaw.noooooo.i will sell myself extensive.:rolleyes:
thanks for your interst for me.i am scaning it.tommorow it will be here.:bounce:

saturen3
01-13-2004, 10:30 PM
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Hi All Dear Artists At The Alienware CG Challenge
I think that i must change some of my ideas about this work.
My new and clean idea is this:
A combination of the sky and earth with some sybols of the aliens life in it.
i think that Sometimes with a simple exchanging the place or form of some custom or traditional objects,
we could get amazing results.
good luck to the all friends

saturen3
01-13-2004, 10:58 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074034718_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074034718_large.jpg)

i created a photoshop image for it to say my idea better.
excuse me for my bad painting......
i am going to combine the sky and the earth.it`s some difficalt but i have either the sky and the earth in my hands.
please put here your thoughts.its amazing for me to knowing your good ideas.

miguelf
01-13-2004, 10:59 PM
hi saturen3

nice concept and design ... has u sad before u must hurry up, put the sky and some fog or boreal kind , and your scene starting automaticaly having some deph and probably better...

good luck ... i'm waitting for updates

saturen3
01-13-2004, 11:54 PM
thanks dear migas :thumbsup:
and thanks for your energy and interests to me.know i am going to do them.:bounce:

Clorets
01-14-2004, 01:01 AM
:thumbsup:
wow, Great concept, I just hope you'll finish on time. Keep up the good work

good luck :applause:

saturen3
01-14-2004, 01:11 AM
:thumbsup: thanks dear mkerouch
realy i am working on it.
good luck to you :wavey:

swadepgh
01-14-2004, 04:13 AM
Hey saturen3! Thanks for your kind words about my challenge entry. Your latest Photoshop image is amazing. I am sure that with those painting skills you will be able to complete an amazing entry with plenty of time to spare. Keep the updates coming. I can't wait to see how it turns out. :thumbsup:

saturen3
01-14-2004, 04:21 AM
Hey sara
thanks too for your interests to me.I realy believe that you know the colors.i like the way that you have choosed.
good luck to you:thumbsup:

rattlesnake
01-14-2004, 04:37 AM
seems like this is going to be a great entry, u have a great concept at least, u must hurry to bring this fantastic idea to life, i think you need some elements, some alien elements, maybe theyre created with some kind of gaseosus substance, what do u think? (i must stop smoking this stuff)

saturen3
01-14-2004, 05:00 AM
Thanks dear rattlesnake:bounce:
your idea is very good,my final goal is compositing the earth and the sky.and between this project the gaseosus substance could be a perfect middle way.
I must sketch it.and i think that i can use it.one of my problems is this who i don`t like to show the alien environment or life directly.
its amazing to listen your ideas.
good luck and thanks for your interest
:bowdown:

saturen3
01-14-2004, 08:15 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074111338_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074111338_large.jpg)

Modeling the montains of the earth.
I know that the friends are so busy.so i dont ask them for putting thoughts.
anyway it`s pretty to listening other ideas.

saturen3
01-14-2004, 08:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074111952_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074111952_large.jpg)

This is starting of the new idea.good time for creating it.

saturen3
01-14-2004, 11:58 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074124687_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074124687_large.jpg)

its my environment.ohhhhhhhhhh
anybody here ?

saturen3
01-15-2004, 12:02 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074124938_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074124938_large.jpg)

i edited the image in after effects.
now i am doing modeling and texturing and lighting all together.it`s very bad but no have time.

saturen3
01-15-2004, 12:07 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074125271_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074125271_large.jpg)

Hi dear guys.
Now i aded the background.and some editing in the after effects.
yet the most problem is the aliens.

rattlesnake
01-15-2004, 12:15 AM
wow, amazing looking of your environment:eek: i love the lighting you chose for it, maybe alien thing can look a little bit like the glow u added at your post effects image. wow youre working really fast man, keep it going:thumbsup:

saturen3
01-15-2004, 12:30 AM
Hey rattlesnake!Thanks for your interest to me.ohhhh.good thing.
glow!i must add some glowy things of course after the modeling.
good idea.:wavey:

swadepgh
01-15-2004, 02:17 AM
Hey looking great! I love the lighting/glow effect. You might try defining the upper left corner of the image just a bit more. Still keep the mysterious darkness, but maybe add a hint of obscured shape(s) to intrigue the viewer and balance the composition. Or not, if you like it the way it is. I can't believe how fast you put this together. Let's see some more!:applause:

saturen3
01-15-2004, 02:32 AM
:thumbsup: You are OK dear sara!
I think that i will put the alien shapes or forms with low opacity on the dark areas.
About composition you are ok and i must keep it right.for doing this i am modeling the alien symbols.
Thanks for your interests.
:wip:

miguelf
01-15-2004, 02:37 AM
hi saturen3

very good uptades, your images are starting to get shape, the background enviroment are rising from the frame, keep up the good work.... i know as we say here in portugal « .... rush is enemy of perfection ...» but with your skill u will finish at time your images .... :)

good luck to u

waitting for uptades

TheFirstAngel
01-15-2004, 02:41 AM
Beatifull Light, great texures, Love the work big time, It just looks fantastic! Keep on rockin' great work here in progress :thumbsup: :wip: :buttrock:

Defonten
01-15-2004, 07:22 AM
Hey Saturen! Very nice WIP !!! But I'd suggest not to put in such deep darkness 80% of image. Textures and BG are really great! Great work Saturen! :beer:

saturen3
01-15-2004, 11:20 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074165641_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074165641_large.jpg)

COOL GUYS
yet i havn`t finished the alien model and i tried to take a new render test with DOF.

saturen3
01-15-2004, 11:32 AM
:thumbsup: Thanks for your interests dear GUYS
Thanks for migas74,the1st_angel,swadepgh and defonten.
You are ok defonten.
i will put the alien forms in the dark areas.of course it will be a test.but if i havn`t time it will be the final image.
thanks again all of the artists

Pufferfish
01-15-2004, 12:14 PM
Hi there,

Yes, pretty cool progress pics you have here.
About the last 2 of your images, I definitely would go without DOF, it just blurs all the detail you have there, and because your pic is so dark the blur just makes it a bit messy.

I really like the light effect on the right side. You said you will use some alien shapes on the left side, please do that and make the light from the right to light them up.

You work has a great feeling in it, very moody piece of art.

Good work, keep it up and good luck for the challenge!:thumbsup:

saturen3
01-15-2004, 01:11 PM
:eek: Thanks for coming here.
Its pretty amazing to see you here dear PUFFERFISH .you have good concepts and good modeling and stronge working on all of the modeling methods.
Also i saw your crystal city(one map + box modeling).It was at highest level of the power.
About your challenge i liked to say you to write a TUTORIAL about your work.
You are ok about DOF and i will uncheck it.now i am working on the aliens.

Thanks again and Good Luck to you

BClaw
01-15-2004, 11:13 PM
Salam!

Wow! :eek: Dark, brooding, realistic, and very cool! I can't wait to see more! :bounce: Good luck, my friend.

swadepgh
01-15-2004, 11:43 PM
Your most recent image with the DOF looks awesome. You could have a really strong piece with that alone . Even if you didn't add anything else, you shouldn't worry. It is looking very moody and mysterious. I really like how it is turning out. :thumbsup:

To get some of the details back in the foreground maybe you could overlay the DOF image on the one without DOF and show the effect over the top half of the image only. This would give you the details in the foreground and the cool effect the DOF gives the background, without having to re-render anything.

Now let's see it with those aliens!:)

saturen3
01-16-2004, 12:00 AM
:bounce: Thanks dear friends,Sara and Bart!
Thanks for your good words to me.
To burt:Do you know persian ?:thumbsup: or you have some iranian friends?:rolleyes: so amazing for me.
Also please tell me my mistakes and give me your good ideas to keeping the image up.thanks again

to Sara:thanks for your kindly words.pufferfish told me opposite of this about DOF.and it`s because of defferent feelings.I realy like the DOF effect and it unfortunately kills more of the details.
Now i don`t know what to do.please tell me your new ideas because they are very helpful.

good luck to you dear friends

TheFirstAngel
01-16-2004, 12:27 AM
Salam Aleikum Saturen!

Just have read what you wrote in Sara's tread and hope I can give you a thought. Detail do Never make anything more or less professional. Make things look good in a simple way means to go the HARD WAY to find ESSENTIALS. And that's what really makes a masterpiece. To JUST do what is required to give ppl the feeling or an idea, a visual description of a dream or a vision, an emotion.
I love your Creation because it is VERY Essential and I just have 1 tiny little suggestion. dont set the amount of DOF too high, you overblur the fine and beautifull nuances. If you use it, use it with the same feeling you built up the rest of your beautifull work. Don't overshoot. Just finetune. Your work rocks and I love it big time cuz it makes your fantasy fly!!!
Keep on Rockin'!!!:wavey: :beer: :buttrock:

saturen3
01-16-2004, 12:44 AM
Aleykom-o-salam the1st_angel
Thanks for your interests and followings for me.I have good friends here.and thanks for your persian hello.
Realy i believe your words.Of course i am usually between these two bridges:
1.doing hard and detailed works
2.presenting the simply and clean ideas
You are ok and it`s better for me to do my work and follow my feeling.
About my great problem(DOF),i think that its better to cleaning it for getting a good result and keeping the details.
Thanks again for your interests to me
good luck to you
:love:

TheFirstAngel
01-16-2004, 12:54 AM
Thank you very much my friend and best luck to you too Saturen! :bowdown: :wavey: :thumbsup:

saturen3
01-16-2004, 01:41 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074217272_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074217272_large.jpg)

the back is a spline surface the foreground is polymodeling.

eska
01-16-2004, 02:43 AM
I don't know if I already posted something on your page,but if not, I am doing it now;
VERY BEAUTIFUL., especially the feeling of some kind of hidden mystics.
Keep fighting and good luck:bowdown: :wavey:

***D!D***
01-16-2004, 03:28 AM
:buttrock: Very good work. I can't wait to see that with beautifuls textures...:thumbsup:

Good continuation, keep your style and good luck :beer:
:buttrock: Pogo pogo pogo...!!!

Click here to enter in my w.i.p ***D!D*** (cyborgreen-team) (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=114287&perpage=15&pagenumber=1)

swadepgh
01-16-2004, 05:54 AM
Hey saturen3. I should clarify my last post to you. I do like the DOF that you added a lot, but I agree with Pufferfish that you are losing too much detail with it. Maybe you could find some middle ground there...maybe still use DOF but tone it down a bit so you can still see the great texture details in the front. As for modeling detailed aliens: I think the greatest strength of your piece is the mysterious quality that it has. It hints that there is life there, but doesn't give away too much. I think that if you added detailed aliens, you would lose this wonderful engaging quality that the image has now. I think you really have a good idea here. The reasons that I like your DOF image are 1. The sky in that one is awesome, and 2. The upper left corner gains some "barely there" forms peeking through the fog. Keep doing just what you are doing. Detail doesn't make anything more or less professional. If it did, then Modrian and Le Corbusier would not be famous fixtures in the history of art and architecture. Cheer up! :thumbsup:

saturen3
01-16-2004, 11:59 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074254348_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074254348_large.jpg)

Ye i am thinking about alien forms.and my modeles are very simple.Again i worked on my last image in the max by adding some lights and in after effects.

JamesMK
01-16-2004, 12:27 PM
Whoa, the last one looks great! I immediately got a feeling of some wild rolling fog coming in over the ridge in the left side of the image.

rattlesnake
01-16-2004, 01:50 PM
this is going to be a superb entry, i can feel it in the air,... well in fact i cant feel anything in the air, but when i saw your updates i saw a great entry is near:applause:

saturen3
01-16-2004, 02:27 PM
:wavey: Thanks all dear friends for your interests.
to eska:realy thanks for your interest.I saw your work and it was a great and high detailed work.you are a good and hard worker.About the mystic of the image,it`s your good thought and i didn`t do any special work on it.anyway i like the work of good friends such as you.:bounce:

to D!D:thanks for your interest.also your work is great and awesome.

:thumbsup:

saturen3
01-16-2004, 02:50 PM
:bounce: thanks dears swadepgh,jamesMK and rattlesnake!
your interests are so amazing for me and too unbelievable!!!...

Dear swadwpgh:you are realy right and its better to bluring any special are in the photoshop.because it`s very manipulatable and doesn`t need any render.
About mysterious feeling you are right exactly and i like it.But now i have an idea that like to say you.I want to put a piece of sky on the ground.Idon`t know what will be the result.anyway i must check it.If i couldn`t complete it i will put this image (with some editing)as the final image.
o amazing to know your thought and other friends about it.
thanks again and good luck

:wip:

miguelf
01-16-2004, 06:13 PM
hey saturen3

Your work are truly amazing...the background are very cool, fantastic colors and dynamic ... one sujestion u have to push the depth of the scene ... i can't see at the firs look where finish the «stairs» and start the background ... u may have or put a reference object or use a depth DOF .... anyway great work

Good luck to u dear friend

saturen3
01-16-2004, 06:31 PM
:bounce: Thanks dear migas for your interest
realy you are right.I must do it.I like to do it in the photoshop and blur that point in the separate layers.
And i like to put the material of the sky in the ground.Whats your idea ?
:bounce: :thumbsup:

saturen3
01-16-2004, 08:24 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074284644_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074284644_large.jpg)

I am modeling the holes for the right of the scene.
I will assign the sky material to it.Whats your idea dear friends ?

saturen3
01-16-2004, 11:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074296562_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074296562_large.jpg)

some editing the holes now.

saturen3
01-16-2004, 11:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074297078_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074297078_large.jpg)

A hole with meshsmooth

saturen3
01-17-2004, 12:08 AM
:scream: I thik that i will leave aliean forms.But still i think about them.It`s hard to show them directely for me and i like to have secret about them.:bowdown:
Tell me your ideas dear friends:buttrock:

saturen3
01-17-2004, 12:19 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074298767_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074298767_large.jpg)

rendering and rendering...........

bigbigblues
01-17-2004, 02:06 AM
Absolutely striking colors! This makes me want to be there, to be able to walk around. I look forward to the finished piece.

saturen3
01-17-2004, 02:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074307220_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074307220_large.jpg)

I don`t know that my system could do the final render.
Anyway i am doing it.and i think that its very busy.Whats your idea dear friends ?

saturen3
01-17-2004, 02:45 AM
:bounce: Thanks dear bigbigblues!
I think that all of the friends are on their own work.
Thanks for your interest to me :thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
01-17-2004, 03:28 AM
Salam aleykum dear Saturen!
Couldn't get online cuz I wouldn't risk a crash, now made it and enjoy your fantastic piece!
I like bot of your last posts very very much, but I think the first one has more power, as the colors are simply brilliant!
Best luck my friend and keep on rockin'!:wavey: :love: :wip:

smok3
01-17-2004, 03:33 AM
well, i just stare at it and iam amazed :) , you really got the talent, actually this could be sort of alienlook prototype, of course original / fresh one i mean.

and a silly question: do you read from right to left in your original writing?

BClaw
01-17-2004, 05:14 AM
Your entry is just getting better and better! :buttrock: Amazing! :bounce: The very best of luck, my friend. :applause:

OT: Actually, I can only say one thing in Farsi - 'Tavalodeh man bistonohomeh march' (Which I *hope* is giving you my birthdate, appologies if I mangled the language into something profane...) But, yes, I have two friends from Tehran and they taught me that much. :)

Luck again in the contest!

saturen3
01-17-2004, 03:00 PM
:p Thanks dear friends!

Hey sacha!thanks for your always and good interests to me.Realy i believe your idea.I like the secound picture because of its complexity and the first picture because of its brilliant mode.
Whats your idea?How could i gett a between image?Do you think that its better tochoose first image as the final ?
Thanks for your interests and good luck to you.


smok3!hey thanks for comming here.your work is realy stronge and very moody.I like it and i think that you are very comefortable in thinking.
:applause: yes,I right from right.How did you find it ?so amazing.I can guess a thing but i don`t know that it`s right or not.Is your mean the weight of the image at the right of it?
Also a question:I couldn`t know your mean about original/fresh one.
Thanks for your interests to me.good luck to you.:thumbsup: :wip:

My old friend Burt:thanks for comming again.what about your work?did you achieved the fog problems?
Thanks for your persoan speaking.You speak Farsi very good.I must remember 29 march.profane?ohhh.no.Its our wish that a foreign man speaks Farsi.
Thanks for your interests and please put your ideas if they are opposite of the image.so amazing to know your ideas.
good luck to you

Cullen
01-17-2004, 04:30 PM
wow.. you have captured a great mood with your lighting. I am not so sure I liked teh latest sky texture though... the blue/purple one was awesome... it almost looks like a worm hole passing though the sky... yet on the left in continues on into the bg.

the holes are good.... but just a thought. maybe do a lighting test where there are full on intense lights (orange maybe) in the holes... so then we wonder what is down there causing this.

Yeah... while I like the colours of 2 posts ago... the softness of the last post is great, although now we have lost detail (or even a rim) or the piled rocks on the left.

JamesMK
01-17-2004, 05:04 PM
I actually like the previous one a lot more - that was brilliant.
This last update looks a bit confusing IMHO.

saturen3
01-17-2004, 05:39 PM
:bounce: Thanks dear cullen and jamesMk!

dear cullen,thanks for your good thoughts and interests.Yoy said a good thing about holes.now i am testing them for lights.It could be so amazing.I think that i will choose the first image.Secound has good items but such as you i am worry about losing details.
Now i am goin to do that.
:thumbsup:

dear friend,jamesMK,I am with you realy and 90% i will choose the first image.good luck and thanks for your interests.What about upir work?:wip: :bowdown:

saturen3
01-17-2004, 06:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074363291_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074363291_large.jpg)

Now system is rendering the holes lights.

eska
01-17-2004, 07:00 PM
Let me guess - the light will be of shiny turquoise color1.:D

saturen3
01-17-2004, 08:06 PM
:beer: I am not sure about that.My test render hadn`t good result.perhaps i do other test about that.My system is amd 500Mhtzwith 256Mb ram.I cann`t test every idea.:cry:
very bad for me.:love:

saturen3
01-17-2004, 10:29 PM
:thumbsup: Thanks dear eska for your interests,

I thought that i have a problem with glows and i cann`t do it.because i am rendering with vray.
Anyway thanks for your replies and interests for me.good luck to you.:wip:

saturen3
01-17-2004, 10:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074379900_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074379900_large.jpg)

I think that it`s my final image and i am tired now.If i like a better version my system cann`t.thanks for friends interests.

Cullen
01-17-2004, 11:07 PM
wow... i really like this interactivity with the sky.
It could be that the sky is being sucked into the planet, or that the planet is creating the sky.... or... maybe they just are as one.
great job... i hope you have had an awesome time on this challenge.

saturen3
01-17-2004, 11:18 PM
:bounce: Thanks dear cullen

At the end posted by cullen[QUOTE]It could be that the sky is being sucked into the planet, or that the planet is creating the sky.... or... maybe they just are as one.

these parameters that you said was the most of my goal in this image.I am happy that i could tell this to the viewer.

Realy thanks for your subtle interests.

bigbigblues
01-17-2004, 11:33 PM
A mighty fine piece of artwork you've made here. Truly well done. The colors grab me and don't want to let go. Best of luck to you, and thank you for your comments as well. Take care.

-Lee

swadepgh
01-17-2004, 11:38 PM
Nice work. I like the sky/ground mixing. Very cool.

:thumbsup:

saturen3
01-18-2004, 12:00 AM
:bounce: Thanks dear sara and LEE.
bigbigblues,thanks for your words,I think that its the highest level of my ablity and i cann`t do anymore.I like your work and you are a hard worker with a good vision.
Thanks for your interests

sara!always you give me a full system of energy.thanks for your interests and good luck to you too.

:love:

chrish
01-18-2004, 12:14 AM
Nice image, actually if you take your image into a compositing application, You would be able to isolate your glows and fine tune them much easier,

Cheers,

Chrish
:cool: View my Alien World (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=113220&perpage=15&pagenumber=1)

rickycox
01-18-2004, 01:44 AM
Wow that sky is looking amazing. To my eye the picture looks complete, I can't imagine much more. Exccelent work saturen, keep going mate. :applause: :thumbsup:

saturen3
01-18-2004, 01:51 AM
:buttrock: Thanks dear friends,chrish and Riki.

to chrish!so amazing,Its myedited picture in photoshop and after effects.you are right about glows,Because of my system problems i will post this image.
Thanks for your interests to me and good luck to you.

to Riki,ohh,you are a proffessional and hard worker man such as many of my friends,I cann`t sit on my place when i hear this words from you.Its so mazing for me.thanks for your interests and good luck to you too.:thumbsup: :wip:

TheFirstAngel
01-18-2004, 02:12 AM
It' so beatifull, I love the light, the colors, the fine structures and great emotional mood your Work has. Everything in it is done with much love and care, and I can feel it!
Best Luck dear Saturen, and also thanks again for all you do for the artists in here, your encouragement and advices. Keep the spirit, best luck for you, I really love your work!!!!:buttrock: :love: :wavey:

monsitj
01-18-2004, 06:05 AM
cool sky ! love it ! my suggestion is only the image is heavy on right part , maybe you plan to add a little detail in the left part ,
overall is great !!:buttrock:

rattlesnake
01-18-2004, 07:08 AM
wow now your concept have turn into this beautifull image, incredible work, i think you created everything so well , the textures , the lighting and model, it simply rocks! most i love is the looking of the sky, great entry my friend!!:thumbsup:

saturen3
01-18-2004, 12:46 PM
:bounce: Thanks dear friends for your interests

To 1st_angel,my dear friend!Hearing this words from a professional such as you is very interesting for me i can work better and better.thanks and good luck to you dear friend.
:thumbsup:

Dear mostij my new friend,wellcom here and thanks for your suggestion,Realy you are ok about the composition of the image.I will fix it in photoshop and affter effects.thanks again and good luck to you.
:bounce:

Dear rattlesnake!!what about your WIP?I love it very much and it has a good process but unfortunately i havn`t any knowledge about characters and i cann`t give you ideas.anyway i follow it.
Realy thanks because of your encouragements to me.you have a good work too.Thanks and good luck to you
:thumbsup:

miguelf
01-18-2004, 03:32 PM
HI dear fellow saturen3

Your work have an oustanding progress, i just love your enviroment background sky, nice colors and dynamic clouds, they are in the good way ...

Good luck to u ... these contest reveal great artist and works i'm very proud to make part of them.








my ALIEWARE wip (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=96955&perpage=15&highlight=miguel&pagenumber=3)

saturen3
01-18-2004, 03:43 PM
:thumbsup: Thanks migas for your encouragements
ORIGINIALY POSTED BY MIGAS74:


[QUOTE]these contest reveal great artist and works i'm very proud to make part of them.

It`s realy one of the best sentences that i have read here.

Thanks for your interests and good luck to you too.:bounce:

BClaw
01-18-2004, 06:16 PM
Yours is a very exciting piece of artwork! :drool: You have an incredible talent! :bowdown: Also, I appreciate your words of encouragement very much. :love: You've been an inspiration to me, my friend.

Good luck in the judging! :bounce:

saturen3
01-18-2004, 10:57 PM
:thumbsup: Thanks dear Bclaw(mamnoon az lotfe shoma)

I didn`t do any work.I liked and still like you be the first.I must say that your interests and encouragements had a stronge effect on my work.I like your work and your working.For me that don`t like to continue the live in this age of my country your helps and thoughts has a incredible inpiration on me.Realy thanks for your interests and encouragements again and good luck to you and all of our fri:wavey:

TheFirstAngel
01-19-2004, 05:32 AM
Best of all for you my friend, best wishes, best luck! Your work is simply beautifull and i love it big time! All the best my friend, all the best!!!:wavey: :love: :beer:

swadepgh
01-19-2004, 06:26 AM
So saturen3 have you posted your final image yet and I missed it?


You said the last was almost final...but where is the final?

I hope your renders are going well. Best of luck to you.

saturen3
01-19-2004, 02:58 PM
:thumbsup: Thanks dear friends realy
dear sacha,realy i don`t know what must i say,only i wish we have good future in our work and more important our live.

:bounce: Best and best and best luck to you dear sacha:wavey:

Dear sara,you are realy one of my best encouraging friends that follow my work realy,The final work is now ready and know i am putting it here,Thanks for your interests and gooooood luck to you too,:thumbsup:

eska
01-19-2004, 03:13 PM
A beautiful world come truth< that's it man - BEAUTIFUL.
Best luck to you. Your hard work really paid of.:bowdown: :wavey:

saturen3
01-19-2004, 03:15 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074525315_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074525315_large.jpg)

Now it`s the final image.and i can sit on my chair and giving some energy to my friends.

eska
01-19-2004, 03:27 PM
Hi
The computer posted the message before, but I mean NOOOOW.
It's excellent, apsolutly excellent mood, color choice and excellent lightning.
I wish you all the luck of the world,
You definitaly deserve it:thumbsup: :bowdown: :wavey:

saturen3
01-19-2004, 03:32 PM
:bounce: Thanks dear eska for your interests.

Realy thanks,you are one of my best friends and you have a stronge and beautiful work.Now i have problem with submitting final .TIF,I don`t know whats the matter,but i must submit as soon.

Thanks again and good luck to you dear eska.:wavey:

swadepgh
01-19-2004, 03:57 PM
Hey congratulations on a beautiful and unique final image! Good luck! :beer: :thumbsup:

saturen3
01-19-2004, 04:12 PM
:thumbsup: Thanks dear sara for your good words and comments.

good luck to you:wavey:

saturen3
01-19-2004, 04:51 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074531115_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074531115_large.jpg)

I didnt post the texturing and lighting items,and my problem i think is because of this.anyway.......texturing

saturen3
01-19-2004, 04:59 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074531592_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074531592_large.jpg)

here is the material that i created for the sky.

saturen3
01-19-2004, 05:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074531742_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074531742_large.jpg)

Only 2 lights that i used here.

saturen3
01-19-2004, 05:07 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074532066_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074532066_large.jpg)

i entered wrong name for lighting.

saturen3
01-19-2004, 05:10 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074532257_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/1262/1262_1074532257_large.jpg)

And my final image again.

JamesMK
01-19-2004, 05:26 PM
Congratulations, Ali!

I think you've done a great work with this image. That sky is very cool, and turned out exactly how I hoped it would.

saturen3
01-19-2004, 05:42 PM
:thumbsup: Thanks dear jamesMK.

but realy i have problem with uploading the final .TIF


thanks for your interests and god luck to you.

miguelf
01-19-2004, 06:01 PM
hi saturen3

what's wrong with your tiff upload .... need help

saturen3
01-19-2004, 06:16 PM
Thanks dear migas

when i want to upload .TIF format,it says me you yet havn`t submitted final image,but i posted my final .JPG format in my thread.

Where did you do it?could you guide me ?
thanks again

miguelf
01-19-2004, 06:40 PM
hi saturen3

Here the steps

1) - Go to AlienWare page for submiting the final image (http://www.cgnetworks.com/alienware/final_image.php) it's the same location where u submit the jpg, but instead of «submit entry» u should go to «submit final image».

2) Make the login

3) Search for your personal upload details:

FTP Host: ftp.cgnetworks.com.
FTP Username: challenge3
FTP Password: alienware
FTP Filename: ????_???.zip ( here u should have your personal number=your file name

4) Open the browser of the internet, instead «http://www....» u shoul write ftp.cgnetworks.com.

5) A window appears put the username and password

6) A windows frame appear with many works with the number of the various users .

7) Just copy your .zip work into the frame(FTP Filename: ????_???.zip)

8) and u ready for voting

Good luck


:thumbsup:

saturen3
01-19-2004, 07:24 PM
hanks dear migas

I opened my browser and i typed this words:

challenge3 for username
alienware for password

But it cann`t open the ftp page for me.IS there any special username and password that i don`t know it ?or i must enter these words for opening the page?

Thanks and excuse me for questions

miguelf
01-19-2004, 09:12 PM
:shrug:

i dont' know what's happening .... after login (click on submit final images link) see your upload details .... maybe your username and password are differents ... i dont think so .... anyway if u can't make the upload it's better to write a post the the administrator ... i dont see any error in the steps that i made u..

it's all i can do for now ... sorry

saturen3
01-20-2004, 12:09 AM
Ohh thanks
I am doing it.Realy thanks,If you didn`t say it to me i don`t know what must i did.
Thanks again dear migas

TheFirstAngel
01-20-2004, 12:43 AM
Hi dear friend!

I didn't exactly know what the problem is, are you sure you submitted ALL milestones?

I have asked Leigh. Now she has written the answer in my thread:

What exactly is the error message saying? Have you read this thread for uploading instructions?
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=114152


__________________
Leigh A. van der Byl | CG Talk Manager
Texturing Artist | VFX Artist


please contact her

saturen3
01-20-2004, 12:56 AM
:eek: :bounce: :thumbsup: HEy dear sacha!

Amazing to see you here.Thanks for your comming back.I thought that you have left here for your rendering.

There is no problem.I am posting the file.

But realy what about your work?About rendering time?
I wish you to finish it at the time.Please hurry up if you havn`t do it.

Thanks for your incredible interests and goooood luck to you dear sacha

saturen3
01-20-2004, 03:18 AM
Great Challenge

Realy Special Thanks for all of my dear friends specialy MIgas74,the1st_angel,swadepgh,Bclaw,rattlesnake,eska,JamesMK,cullen,defonten,funkymunkey90,bigbigblues,riki,
***D!D***,smok3,mkerouch and monsitj.

migas74:for your realy follows and encouragements and more importatnt your latest help to me for posting the final file.I don`t forget your last help.Realy thanx.

the1st_angel:All of us know your kind heart and possitive forces for here artists and proud it realy.Always your supports was my energy BOMB.thanks for your kind words.

swadepgh:dear sara!always your good words gaved me energy.i don`t forget your helps.

Dear defonten,Bclaw,rattlesnake was my encouragementing friends and they were with me from first to end.

Special Thanks For:
CGTALK and ALIENWARE for there realy great and amazing challenge that gaved us a new force and energy for continuing our artwork better and better than before.
And special thanks for anyone who had worked for this challenge and thanks for their time.Moderators,supporters and other men and wumen that i don`t know but they work for us.

Good luck to all of the artists and friends

Ali Reza Seifi

eska
01-20-2004, 08:00 PM
Good, you solved your problem, excellent.
I wanted also to help, felt bad that I came late,
but now I can breath better.
Anyway, your work is breathtakin, and I mean it,
just simply beautiful.
You are a great artist.
Best luck to you.:bowdown: :wavey:

I would be honored if you have time to visit also my thread

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?postid=1090320#post1090320

saturen3
01-21-2004, 11:07 AM
:thumbsup: Thanks dear eska

Realy thanks for your interests but i think that i have lost my challenge.
There is a problem for me.:scream:

Good luck to you and thanks again.

Cullen
01-21-2004, 03:01 PM
nice work... i like the subtle colour improvments in your final piece.

qwatkins
01-21-2004, 05:37 PM
Wow, very impressed, I think you are definitely in the running on this one.

chrish
01-21-2004, 05:47 PM
you didnt get yours intime, ah man.. check your emails. in the bulk mailer thier should of been clear instructions.

I think for http:// uploads it goes
ftp://user:password@ftp address
then I think you should be able to drag n drop
if the ftp is still up


:shrug:
Chrish

View My Alien World (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=113220&perpage=15&pagenumber=3)

saturen3
01-21-2004, 11:28 PM
Realy thanks dear friends!

Dear cullen,qwuatkins and dear chrish.

I think that i have lost it.Now havn`t time for fixing it realy.But an important thing here is that:

I have found real and good friends such as you that always they think about me.

Thnaks dears and good luck to you all.
:wavey:

eska
01-21-2004, 11:48 PM
Dont be sad Saturen3

First of all, me and many others LOVE your artwork,
excellent combination between 3d and special effects.
Second, the world has seen it.
Third, it's a extraordinary portfolio piece.

Allthouse your piece would have been among the best 10 ones here competing, only the fact that me and many others know this
is already a victory.
People know you now as a excellent artist,
and many more will look at and admire your work.

I wish you all the luck of the world, because I see you competing for the best places in many upcoming competitions.
Best of the best
Suzana

Also I would be honored if you have time to visit also my thread

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?postid=1090320#post1090320
:wavey:

saturen3
01-22-2004, 12:22 AM
Hi dear Suzana!

Realy i don`t know what should i say about your nice words.

Your words had an incredible energy for me.Know with your interests and words i have found a new life.

It`s realy amazing listening this :



Allthouse your piece would have been among the best 10 ones here competing, only the fact that me and many others know this

In Iran we have a sentece that means:
A word of friend can destroy all parts of your hearts home
and then creates a new home on it.
Excuse me for my bad english.
But certainly your words had an incredible effect on me.

Thanks dear Suzana for your intersts and bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbest of lucks to you too.

eska
01-23-2004, 10:17 AM
Saturen3

I am so happy for your successful upload.
I am realy happy that such a excellent work will get a chance. BEAUTIFUL. You have a special angel, and you deserve one.
Congratulations.
Best luck of the entire world to you.:love: :wavey:

rattlesnake
01-24-2004, 10:39 PM
hey Ali,now i know u hate those ampty messages, like your work is 3d worlds god, but sometimes when i see an incredible concept and textures and modelling i just can say " thats great", sorry if i ever fill your thread with crappy post, i always try to help, but also try to encourage persons to get to their max capabilities, so good luck at voting man, youre really an artis, and my last wish is to waste your time mate

BClaw
01-26-2004, 05:45 PM
Heyya Saturen, bud! :beer: Judging's gonna start soon, eh? :eek: No worries, mate, it's been a fun contest, and like has been said before, whatever the outcome, your work is *fantastic*! :bowdown: Good luck and keep on 3Din'! :bounce:

saturen3
01-26-2004, 11:52 PM
Thanks dear friends

Realy thanks dear Bclaw and Rattlesnake!

Here isn`t any problem.and such as before i encourage you and wish best works and situations for you.

Thanks again dear friends for your interests:thumbsup:

miguelf
02-07-2004, 04:37 AM
Hi there dear friend

how are u? i've been out ... any news about the votation?

good luck to u dear friend, and keep in touch.. :thumbsup:

During this break i made this image pls let me know what is your opinion about it

thanks

my last work (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=121170)

saturen3
02-07-2004, 10:39 PM
Hey migas!

Thanks dear friend.

Now i am there for watching your work.

Seems amazing.

:thumbsup:

Mox
02-27-2004, 01:06 PM
First render is very very good, but in the second one I couldnt distinguish what is what. Sky look`s like stone, holes are dark, mountins are unreckognisable (if I didn`t see the first render I could hardly tell what is on the second). I vote for the first render :)

saturen3
02-27-2004, 01:15 PM
Thanks dear MOX

Realy you are ok.I sent the first render.

TX:bounce:

Pooyag
02-29-2004, 09:57 PM
Nice Tryin....Nice Result aswell,Nothin to say anymore....Just Good Luck!

saturen3
03-01-2004, 08:35 PM
Realy Thanks dear Pooya

You are certeinly my old dear friend who always has awesome ideas.

Thanks and best locks to you

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