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vincentvv
11-21-2003, 06:21 PM
this is my first piture...went through hell getting it uploaded...(Fortunately admins are pretty good offering help)http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=503541

so hope this will work

jeroentje
11-21-2003, 06:54 PM
Please give your future threads a proper name. "Picture" goes for every thread on the board ;)

Anyway, welcome to cgtalk, very nice work.

Jeroentje
Moderator.

Don't forget to read this (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=91033) also.

cuse
11-22-2003, 09:30 AM
cool guy.

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=503541


cuse

GFX-Arts
11-22-2003, 07:24 PM
Its only ok (for me) ;) - sorry !!

vincentvv
11-22-2003, 08:22 PM
Aaarghh Plz add just a litle bit more than "cool" and "only ok"
and ull`make me really REALLY happy...
How do i make it better? should it have more colors? etc etc
...at least if u can spare a minutte or 2

:blush:

GFX-Arts
11-23-2003, 07:27 AM
Ok, sorry for my bad english....!

The character isnt so good.
Add another and more colors.

tompa
11-25-2003, 05:36 AM
I realy like your work... By my opinion I think you could detail the
guy and his wepon a little bit more and change the "I wont hurt you" text into a handwritten font type. But over all it's nice.

Neil
11-25-2003, 05:02 PM
You going off of the Spawn look? The text is VERY distracting, get rid of it (if not all of it, atleast the typed text) and work on framing it more.
The edges can be cropped off a bunch.
I would also like to see a more dynamic pose in the future.

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