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11-21-2003, 07:49 AM
Hello , this render is based off of a photo, it was for an assignment, hope you like it and please c&c:D
11-21-2003, 06:24 PM
the mood is quite nice
however i'm not really seeing a sense of depth
perhaps add stronger shadow? especially the
bike in front of the wall, it kinda looks like its
looks nice overall though
11-21-2003, 10:09 PM
thanks for your respnse, i agree with you about the lack of depth, there was somehting abou tit that bugged me but i coudnt pin it down:wip: i have no shadows because there is non in the original image, maybe i should add a depth pass instead:lightbulb
11-22-2003, 03:54 AM
It is difficult to tell where the wall begins. Maybe because of the soft lightning and lack of hard shadows, I'm not sure, but it is difficult to tell what is close or far. It looks flat somewhat. But you are on the right track and it is well composited/modeled. Just looks flat somehow.
01-16-2006, 06:00 PM
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