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DrakenFX
03-29-2012, 02:56 AM
Hi everyone new posting around here.... i just need some critics about the new animation im creating inside and using only After Effects ......is my first project since i lost like 10% of files a few days back...



http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7199/6878050454_7b304458f7_c.jpg

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6036/7024152577_092f5f18a0_c.jpg

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6054/6878051038_632b9e0562_c.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7084/6878051200_2964046ed0_c.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7112/7024152077_37e4d17945_c.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7042/7024151817_c871dea8e1_c.jpg



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v5bTqEGlP6A


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UPDATE :

here is a little update , i'm just doing it from scratch again :mrgreen: , looking for better ways as always and using a different technique (yes i know i have fund 3 so far and this is the best i have come up with but still more to do and so far is looking good..


http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7041/7052661543_0161d77e09_c.jpg

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5272/6906570772_2f18b739e4_c.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7064/6906571190_58e27e9bbc_c.jpg

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5031/6906570992_86ecdafb74_c.jpg


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Any Comment is much appreciated
krueger
03-29-2012, 07:43 AM
It's looking good. The only things I see are the size of the moon looks too big and the earth could use a bit of a glow on the edges.
http://www.universetoday.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/earthmoon.png

And maybe add some detail to the sun.
http://discovervedanta.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/sun-rise-above-earth.jpg
DrakenFX
03-29-2012, 02:08 PM
It's looking good. The only things I see are the size of the moon looks too big and the earth could use a bit of a glow on the edges.
http://www.universetoday.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/earthmoon.png

And maybe add some detail to the sun.
http://discovervedanta.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/sun-rise-above-earth.jpg


Thanks for the feedback and Indeed the moon need to be resize for more realistic look, and thanks for the Sunrise image that will help me more about how Sunset or Sunrise looks from that perspective.....about the glow on Earth it does have (In the Video but not to much glow) but you are right it needs a bit more...

thanks again for the feedback it really help...
DrakenFX
04-07-2012, 05:27 AM
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here is a little update , i'm just doing it from scratch again :mrgreen: , looking for better ways as always and using a different technique (yes i know i have fund 3 so far and this is the best i have come up with but still more to do and so far is looking good..


http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7041/7052661543_0161d77e09_c.jpg

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5272/6906570772_2f18b739e4_c.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7064/6906571190_58e27e9bbc_c.jpg

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5031/6906570992_86ecdafb74_c.jpg


THIS SCENE IS USING ONLY AFTER EFFECTS
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