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marc001
11-18-2003, 05:06 AM
This is a design for a character I will be making in 3D.
I need critique on anatomy and proportions.
Eventually I will draw clothing, and accesories on the figure.
I did some retouching in Photoshop.

http://www.geocities.com/dfa0445/jillTorso.txt

BMunchausen
11-18-2003, 05:47 PM
Proportions aren't bad actually....although as an image, it's disturbing to me that the outside arms are cut off. My only criticisms of the body are that I'd lighten up that big black gash in her abdomen, and on the back view, I'd soften the hairline - right now the white part looks kinda like a metal piece stuck to her head.

It's also a little weird on the frontal one, that you can see her eyebrows thru the hair.

pyraxis
11-19-2003, 05:06 PM
The stomach is way too long... the shape of the lungs should extend much further below the bottom of the breasts. The belly button should be almost between the hips, not so far above them.

Also, the hair looks rather stiff, especially the bangs. Imagine it swinging around more.

marc001
11-20-2003, 10:00 PM
I made some fixes

shortened the hair
fixed eyebrow clipping the hair
moved arm down
added clothing
made rib cage longer
reduced and lowered the belly button

http://www.geocities.com/dfa0445/jillTorso2.txt

The origional design is on my website. I still need to fix the knuckles on her right hand so they are arched instead of linear. The openings in the top for her arms still need rounding. The fabric needs detail. The guns need to be drawn. Eventually she will be wearing a shoulder rig.
Later I will ink, and color the image.

marc001
11-20-2003, 10:54 PM
I made some fixes

shortened hair
moved arm down
added clothing
made rib cage longer
reduced and lowered belly button

http://www.geocities.com/dfa0445/jillTorso2.txt

VShane
11-21-2003, 06:34 AM
This would be one rough to deal with ortho axis template for a 3D model. Do you plan on modeling her in this pose?

marc001
11-21-2003, 09:14 PM
I'm working backwards. I already have a 3D version, and need to make something 2D for the HR departments to look at. Apparently they wont hire an artist who cant draw. Although the model is already on my website, she still needs some fixing in the modeling and textures.

Dr. Eck
11-22-2003, 03:17 PM
Well she looks quite good now I think.
She looks better than the 3d-Model in this pic. I don't really like the model's face. But that's only my opinion. Go on this way.

marc001
12-03-2003, 04:29 AM
Detailed Guns
Added Shoulder, and Thigh Rig
Started coloring

I will do more coloring, and then I'll ink it in Illustrator
http://www.geocities.com/dfa0445/jilltorso3.txt

goertzen_frank
12-03-2003, 04:59 AM
the model on your site is good and this good too - the only suggesting I have for future work is more clothing, now I like T&A as much as the next guy but considering the male dominated work we do there's an awful lot of it, other than that you're doing great.

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