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BoOom
11-17-2003, 07:02 AM
hello I m new here
I already posted this in the 3d section which was wrong I guess so I m posting it again here in hope to get some response
I would really appreciate your crits cause I know that you gys are super spiffy

the pic I Wanna show you was penciled inked colored by me
I used pencils ink pens and photoshop
http://artwanted.com/images/large/5737_52246.jpg

the bg was a photo I found in the internet
I just added a bit and changed the colors
here is the original
http://www.americanet.de/bilder/wolken.JPG

bigger version can be seen here

http://www.deviantart.com/view/3859854/

hope you like it

cnc highly appreciated

Thanx
Cya

Bugle
11-18-2003, 12:49 AM
I like it, especially his expression. He reminds me of the centurions from Asterix :)

2 crits would be the linework, it looks very separate from the colours, maybe you could blend the inks layer a little to make it less separate... and second his shoulder muscle, the shading makes it look like he has a sunken ridge there. The back of the arm probably has too many lines also.

phoenix
11-18-2003, 03:38 AM
nice work....

but man dont u think the arm muscle details a little too much..

BoOom
11-18-2003, 10:16 AM
thanx glad you two liked it
I know the lines aren t the bbest but I ll work on it

And Bugle thanx for you hints they are very helpfull
I guess I wouldn thave seen them without you thanx

More crits please

Cya:eek:

RippleMDK
11-18-2003, 08:11 PM
good comic style... if you need more reference I'd suggest doing a search on Humberto Ramos, and take a look at CrossGen Comics "The First"... your style remeinds me a lot of the 2 arts. Keep up the good work and don't be afraid to try and paint your own background.

RippleMDK

Crime101
11-19-2003, 12:51 AM
Are you a big Joe Mad fan? Some of you style reminds me of his work. I like it, nice job.

GFX-Arts
11-19-2003, 12:52 PM
Nice :)

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