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haru
11-16-2003, 07:58 PM
well i was told to give these voards a visit ,i am curious what ya guys think ,...i tried to obtain the feeling of the blade of the immortal manga ,...i feel happy with it ,..
here is the line art

http://www.sandking.com/images/gallery/37_art141103.jpg

and the colors
http://www.sandking.com/images/gallery/37_art141103colors.jpg

and some colors ,of wich i wished i had colored them cause the whole feeling is so much better

colored by : FEV.
http://www.fevereon.com/mb/apx/stefan1.jpg

let me know what ya think ,make me feel welcome ;) j/k
W!zard
11-16-2003, 10:00 PM
Hi there, as start looks good, but i think you should work more on anatomy. Then if you want to work in manga style, clear the lines and try to ink, then step to coloring. Just a suggestion:) Keep the good work!
Regards!
wedge
11-16-2003, 11:38 PM
he's not asian. well. he doesn't look asian anyways.

and he's all wobbly. his head isn't centered, and it makes the viewer feel off balance. i can't spot anything specifically wrong with the image, but theres something off about it, and i think the lack of balance is it.
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