Lizard Warrior

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wow man this is really good. the central blocks are well placed, and in such a way that there is a lot of motion conveyed. the musculature, though its a fantasy creature, seems spot on, and your use of simulated perspective is excellent.

can't wait to see this colored.

the only things i might change is the left arm (his right).

it seems like the foreshortening messed with you a little bit, but further than that it doesn't look like its the same style as the rest of him. the arm looks like an after thought.

[Runefall]

Thanks for the crit, here's an updated version. I added in more shading, placed his right hand in front of the necklace instead of behind, and fixed some perspective on his nose.



http://stu.aii.edu/~cgp271/lizz-low.jpg

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much better!

now start coloring!

[Runefall]

Here's some progress. This is my first serious attempt at coloring something, so suggestions are welcome. I'm thinking of giving him some spots/stripes/markings, any thoughts?

http://stu.aii.edu/~cgp271/colorlizz.jpg

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spots might help. its looking really good already, probably since the black/white shading was already very strong.

i have to say, i really dig the hand in front of the necklace as opposed to behind. a great improvemnet.

[Quester99]

Very cool. I think you should add a background. other than that, I don't know what could be improved (other than finishing it, but it wouldn't be here if it was done, would it :D)

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