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Akinsthestarchild93
12-26-2011, 03:18 AM
Is there anything I can do to improve this walk cycle?

http://vimeo.com/34206568

http://vimeo.com/34206580

Proupin
12-27-2011, 05:59 PM
Hi,

You should really get your hands on some tutorials or even better buy the Animator's Survival Kit (a book), that will teach you the fundamentals. Animating is about timing and spacing, and yours are off by a great deal currently.

Andrewty07
12-27-2011, 07:33 PM
For future reference try to cycle animation a few times at least...your animation is nearly robotic. As Proupin said get your hands on the animators survival kit and if your feeling really driven to improve you can learn from "Disney Animation: The Illusion of Life". If your more determined to learn from critiques your more than welcome to but it won't be pretty.

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