Werewolf Officer

[Lunatique]

The lighting isn't very convincing. If the scene is back-lit, then why the treeline isn't casting a distinct shadow? The werewolf is also too bright and diffused--what's lighting him from the front? If you want to depict another light source in front of him, you should make it at least somewhat directional instead of completely diffused. Think about possible secondary light sources and where they'd be in relation to your subject. The main point is that despite a high contrast on the macro level between the moon and the subject, the subject itself is very flat and has no dynamic sense of dimensions.

The square aspect ratio seems like of unnecessary, since your main focus is really more vertical, so a portrait aspect ratio would be just fine. The additional space on either side doesn't add anything to the composition.

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