Upper Body help(zbrush sculpture)

[vincent1]

Try this:


http://www.cgarena.com/freestuff/tutorials/zbrush/red-hulk/red_hulk3.html

[wpmalate]

http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/3080/balrog2.jpg


fixed some stuff, any critique is appreciated.

[vincent1]

IF you are looking for more realistic appearance, the triceps could be more defined; it is a bit lumpy at the moment and the distinctive horseshoe indentation is missing. see some bodybuilders picts for reference.


The biceps in your relaxed pose should really be a bit longish looking rather than the flexed bunched up look it is now.

Reference:
http://www.tribulus.tv/wp-content/gallery/foto/Ahmad%20-%20one%20day%20out.jpg

[wpmalate]

thanks for the feedback Vince. Yeah, most still looks lumpy. I want to hold off putting the details until the forms are pleasing to me.


Fixed some more, still having trouble making the neck/shoulder area right:

http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/5818/balrog4.jpg

[vincent1]

Looking much better already. :-)

[wpmalate]

thanks, took a break from that and did a female body.

http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/5111/femaletorsostudy.jpg

Any critique would be appreciated. I wanna learn from mistakes.

[wpmalate]

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/5568/asdfasdfuxv.jpg

heres some update, put some quick extract to see how it looks with clothes and hair. Comments and critique is appreciated.

[SCB]

Try and rebalance the character in the side view. It looks like she is leaning over slightly in an awkard pose. Also address the body mass proportions. She looks like she has a slender neck, but has a rather sizable bum and her upper torso seems a bit big, almost of male proportions.

[wpmalate]

http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/5632/weraffff.jpg

worked on the proportion a bit, I cringe whenever I see my old posts :shrug: so many things to work on.