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squee
11-08-2003, 05:57 AM
modelled and rendered in 3dmax5. still learning crit welcome
http://www.angelfire.com/blog/jvandyk/Laboratory.jpg

asteval
11-08-2003, 08:43 AM
too dark, I can't see anything! Please post another render:thumbsup:

Rickmeister
11-08-2003, 09:30 AM
Hey,

looks pretty detailed, only your lighting is very bad, i cant see anything.

fire_byrnes
11-08-2003, 09:37 AM
your modeling is very good, but its brought down by bland textures. For example the big round thing with the arms, would look effective with a rusted or scratchy metal texture, instead of a defult colour. just a sugestion:thumbsup: keep up the good work!

avalon
11-08-2003, 10:38 AM
:buttrock: :buttrock:
so real and so detail
very wonderful

michaelyip
11-08-2003, 02:37 PM
so many shadows..haha

Spherio
11-08-2003, 03:59 PM
ya...make it brighter..
looks like nice modeling but you have to improve the lightning

gpepper
11-08-2003, 04:05 PM
the walls and the floor should be better textured. And there's a problem with the shadows... I thinf there are too many lights in your scene...

squee
11-08-2003, 05:52 PM
thanks for the comments, as for the lighting i really have no clue what im doing with it and was trying to create shadows for kind of a scary effect but it didnt really turn out as i had hoped.ill see if i can fix it

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