still: female torso (light nudity)

[BMunchausen]

hey there...
I like the effects on it but the anatomy's not quite right. Even in marble, the breasts would be affected by weight - the right one (her right) should be lower than the left one since the shoulders are tilted that way.

Ribcage is a little long, but not too far off...the direction the torso's facing - a bit away from us, means that you should look carefully at the way the lines at the crotch are drawn. Right now, looks like her pelvis is turning toward us more than logically we know it to be.

Also...the pedestal for this would likely be larger because we're assuming this is a sculptural fragment - meaning, there's likely be some pedestal under the leg that's chopped off more.

Compositionally, I think the whole thing could use some more "breathing room". More space around it, especially at the bottom. It's awkward where the pedestal nearly meets the bottom.

Really nice velvety effect you got going though, with the Photoshop stuff! :)

[bodom]

hi, thanks for your reply, i know somethings wrong with her right breast, i think the crotch is no prob because she is turning her upper part a little... well you as a viewer have seen some probs.. if it would have been drawn right you wouldn't have noticed it.. ;) so you're probably right about it.. well its a few years old, so i'm happy i can do better now... thanks again!

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